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QCE Stuff => QCE Subjects + Help => QCE Marking and Feedback => Topic started by: grace.mc10 on April 16, 2020, 05:19:03 pm
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Hi,
This is my English assignment for IA1. I have to write an online literary essay about a key concept that is both in the play Cosi and the film Little Miss Sunshine. I am focusing on the concept of normality versus abnormality. We are writing for "The Guardian", where an upcoming series of essays will celebrate Cosi - so that's why I have focused on Cosi but supported and shown differences with Little Miss Sunshine as well.
Thanks so much in advance!
Grace
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Hi Grace,
I would be more than happy to look over it for you :)
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Hi Grace,
I'm sorry it took so long but I have finished adding comments and suggestions to your essay. Please don't hesitate to contact me via private messages on the ATAR Notes website or through my email: [email protected] if you have any questions, queries or concerns about the feedback.
Thank you,
Darcy Dillon.
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Hi Darcy,
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback. The help was greatly appreciated!
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No problem.
I was more than happy to help :)