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HSC Stuff => HSC Subjects + Help => HSC Marking and Feedback => Topic started by: ushna on October 03, 2019, 03:51:35 pm

Title: Standard English Discursive Mod C
Post by: ushna on October 03, 2019, 03:51:35 pm

Hi,
Can someone please have a look at my discursive text and give me some feedback on it.

Thank you

Title: Re: Standard English Discursive Mod C
Post by: jelena_nina2001 on October 07, 2019, 08:22:16 pm

Quote from: ushna on October 03, 2019, 03:51:35 pm

Hi,
Can someone please have a look at my discursive text and give me some feedback on it.

Thank you

awesome work! I like the format of a speech (sorry if i'm wrong on that) but all i can say is try and maybe practice shorter pieces under timed conditions but all else is awesome!  :) :) :)