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Title: QCE English IA3 proof reading needed for a short story!!
Post by: juicebox_441 on July 27, 2021, 08:39:50 pm
Hi all,

I need someone to please have a read over my short story and give me honest feedback. Can you please let me know if the story flows and makes sense? Also, do the sentences make sense and are grammatically accurate?
We're supposed to construct a slice-of-life story that is based off a culture of our choice, and we're supposed to add a flashback in the middle of the story and then finish off the story mysteriously or with a twist that is up to the reader to interpret.

My story is based off a Middle Eastern/Muslim vibes culture, and revolves around a doctor who decides to leave her birth place (Iraq) and move to Australia just to get better payment.

Thanks heaps!!
Title: Re: QCE English IA3 proof reading needed for a short story!!
Post by: liliholmes on July 28, 2021, 10:51:34 am
Quote from: juicebox_441 on July 27, 2021, 08:39:50 pm

When is this due? I have my exam tomorrow, might as well just wing it lol
Title: Re: QCE English IA3 proof reading needed for a short story!!
Post by: juicebox_441 on August 02, 2021, 10:55:23 am
Quote from: liliholmes on July 28, 2021, 10:51:34 am
When is this due? I have my exam tomorrow, might as well just wing it lol
My exam's this friday...still haven't got enough feedback lol !!
Title: Re: QCE English IA3 proof reading needed for a short story!!
Post by: Corinne112 on July 04, 2022, 01:07:04 pm
Quote from: juicebox_441 on August 02, 2021, 10:55:23 am
My exam's this friday...still haven't got enough feedback lol !!uno online
No worries. I’d highly recommend that you do further research though, just in case you find another career, course or area you’re interested in. That way, you’ll be able to weigh all your options and find the best courses for you.