Overall an alright effort, but I find that in many places there was a general lack of depth and detail, and some of your sentences need rewording. Maybe it's just me, but I'm kinda iffy with your word choice in some cases: e.g. "a quick wrap up" just sounds much too colloquial for a language analysis.
Also some grammatical errors: as well as swaying readers into encouraging - not sure if it was a typo or not.
as well as swaying readers towards a change in immigration laws
Throughout Bolt's article he attempts toidentify(hmm not sure if this is the right word? Do you mean like, 'draw out' Maybe a good word would be "elicit"?) a sense of disdain in his readers towards Prime Minister Julia Gillard and her Labor Government,as well asandswaypersuade readers into encouraging a change in immigration laws through the use of (list persuasive techniques e.g rhetorical questions etc) which is (effective/ineffective etc.) to get Bolt's point of across and ahis textual argument compounded by a horrific image.(erm, i'm not really sure what you mean by compound, maybe the word 'cements' would fit better?)horrific image cements his textual argument
Oh and to make it a bit more lengthy, our teacher always tells us to write how effective the article in the conclusion.
Oh and to make it a bit more lengthy, our teacher always tells us to write how effective the article in the conclusion.
I think your teacher is giving bad advice here. The task is to analyse language, not to evaluate the validity and/or effectiveness of the text. Although assessors accommodate for different approaches that are taught (e.g. some schools ask students to speculate where the issue may go in their conclusion) this might be stretching it. The only opinion you present apropos of the text is that of your interpretation of what the author is trying to do.
Oh and to make it a bit more lengthy, our teacher always tells us to write how effective the article in the conclusion.
I think your teacher is giving bad advice here. The task is to analyse language, not to evaluate the validity and/or effectiveness of the text. Although assessors accommodate for different approaches that are taught (e.g. some schools ask students to speculate where the issue may go in their conclusion) this might be stretching it. The only opinion you present apropos of the text is that of your interpretation of what the author is trying to do.