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Analysis:
Regional uproar follows Apple's recent delcaration of its decision to demolish a building at Federation Square so that space occupied by the Victorian landmark is cleared for the contruction of Apple's newest flagship store. April Baragwanat's letter to the editor in reponse to this issue forms one such argument on Apple's demolishing of Victorian heritage. Utilising a nostalgic and matter-of-fact tone, Baragwanat appeals to Apple Australia and the Victorian City Council in contending that it would be unfortunate for future generations to view the destruction of a cultural and social landmark which has gained fame after many years of struggle in making a Victorian emblem as rewarding as that of Federation Square.
Baragwanat establishes that Melbourne City Council has taken effort for numerous years to build a build a city square but wihout success; therefore, Apple's selfish catering for its "commercial aspirations" would be destroying the social benefits that the highly properous Federal Square provides to Melburnians today. Fuelled by a nostalgic tone, the repetition: "many, many attempts" is aimed to respect Melbourne City Council who have genuinely tried in building a city square, but ultimately, Baragwanat's approval of Victorian hardship is dismantled with the negatively connoted adverb "miserably" in "failed miserably." Taking into consideration that this heavy blow to City Council's reputation would disappoint Melbourne's city dwellers or frequent visitors, Baragwanat's start of her sentence with a coordinating conjunction "but" aims to cast light on the development of Federation Square, the project which has finally "worked."
Using personification in "wormed its way into our hearts" and "generous steps," not only makes Federation Square, or colloquially known as "Fed Square" seem a prideful Victorian, but creatively intelligent Victorians who value general mobile technology or even Apple's presentations of their iPhones, would now bring Federation Square's "ros[iness]" to the same level of Apple iPhones' glory or attractive appearance so that these Apple lovers would not condescend Federation Square's "celebrations" in front of Apple's expansion ; Baragwanath sees this as her duty as a Victorian to avoid this patronising.
Despite admitting Federation Square's "quirky, irregular angles" and "tacky gold spaceship," Baragwanath's representation of Federation Square as a metaphor of a "beating heart of Melbourne," appeals to a sense of regional security of life, in that the Victorian City Council are likely to be persuaded to oppose Apple's decision, if it is going to stop Melburnians' lives "at day and night." Members of the city council would be likely to deal with and adjust to any deformations of Federation Square, at the expense of carrying the guilt that Baragwanath places on them, if they don't take action to stop Apple "now."
In accordance with her tonal shift to a "matter-of-fact" tone, Baragwanath appeals to youth amongst the City Council to strive to resist Apple's declaration, as the demolition of a building around Federation Square would destroy a holistic structure that future generations should have the right to "enjoy and value." Despite labelling Apple's "commercial eddifice" as "incongruent" - not much different in naming the landmark's angles "quirky," - Baragwanath continues to abhor Apple's new flagship project, unlike her reverting back to Federation Square's benefits, despite the flaws. This attempts showcases Apple and their decision to be fundamentally detestable in front of they eyes of City Council members, so that they will be reluctant to provide a consent to an announcement that will offer no advantage to its citizens.
Concluding with a notion of Apple's criminality in conducting "urban vandalism," Baragwanath seeks to appeal to the many Victorians like him who would likely be "insulted" - another word in criminal jargon- if a threat as rapidly introduced as Apple's proposal will suppress the Victorian pride in preserving a regional landmark.
Hence, Baragwanath's attempt to flatter Federation Square's importance in contributing to a healthy Victorian heritage is more likely to appeal to Melbourne City Council members who have a strong connection to city landmarks. Criminalising Apple Australia may have a harsh impact on Apple iPhone lovers, but ultimately, maintaining a regional symbol of pride and resilience such as the Federation Square and buildings around it, is persuaded to be the top-most priority for Melbourne City Council at stake.