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There had been much recent debate about the inequality between university students and teaching staff, and department heads in Britain. Professor James Ladyman, who is a direct stakeholder in this issue, being a Department Head himself, writes in a letter to the editor, a reply to a previous article. In keeping with his position at a University, he writes is a formal style. While writing in a predominantly authoritative and calm tone, it does shift to have a more mocking edge towards the end. Ladyman is contending that the high wages of certain non -teaching staff is underserved and doesn’t reflect a significant contribution to the University’s standing. He is addressing readers of The Observer as well as anyone who is following the debate.
Ladyman intends to make his contention clear and memorable by having a clear structure that places the contention, that ‘universities are not run by those who teach them’ and they should be, at the very beginning of the letter. This ensures that the reader is not confused about the direction of the piece, and thus enables Ladyman’s subsequent persuasive endeavours to be effective at positioning the reader to agree with Ladyman’s position.
Ladyman argues that the ‘deans and pro-vice-chancellors’ aren’t an essential part of the University’s role. He does so by juxtaposing their lack of ‘tutorial’ and ‘academic research’ against the commonly held, assumed knowledge that University is a placing of teaching and learning. This thus makes the deans and pro-vice-chancellors appear dispensable to the reader, and thus undeserving of the high wage. This is continued by an overt appeal to democracy, noting that they were once ‘elected’, which positions the readers to consider that there are alternative options that are fairer. The alliterative phrase ‘appointed from above’ is attempting to play on anti-authoritarian values, to encourage the reader to reject the current controlling process.
Layman argues that the contribution of the deans and pro-vice-chancellors is overrated and underperforms. He does so by juxtaposing the highly respected role of teaching against his claims of inefficiency, disruption and waste caused by the non teaching staff. This is emphasised by Layman noting that teaching is paid by the hour, which infantilises it and associates it with youth jobs that carry little important. This positions the reader to change the standard of payment, to match their expectations of teaching. Here, Ladyman becomes somewhat mocking, using the general dislike of bureaucracy to encourage the reader to reject the assumed importance of the deans’ and colleagues work, with a cliche that we are becoming a ‘generation of benchmarks and targets’.
The hyperbolic ‘countless’ exaggerates to the reader the oxymoronic nature of the ‘vision’ statements of the universities, that contain no vision worth ‘immortali[sing]’. This intends to highlight the absurdity of this, which would make the role carried out by these people seem moronic to the reader. Ladyman concludes with a metaphor, of ‘our cathedrals of learning’,that hopes to create a strong, emotional tether for the religious, and generally strong imagery for all, that would make the contention reverberate with the reader, as to improve the likelihood that the reader will agree with the contention that the inequality between the wages of teachers and administrative staff needs to be resolved.