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Title: Who else is nervous?
Post by: /0 on November 01, 2009, 09:52:19 pm
Who else is nervous?   

:) ??? :-\ :(   :'( :D :buck2:
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English Language is my wildest subject. I could perhaps guess my mark to within but that's as close as I can get.
I feel like I could get >70 on a good day and 50-60 on a bad day and 60s on an average day
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: kenny17 on November 01, 2009, 10:20:07 pm
im the same as you, the ea say topics presented will makepor break me   :o
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Post by: ngRISING on November 01, 2009, 10:26:38 pm
lol. i don't think it will be that bad. do you have the insight book? that will be quite useful if you havnt studied as well as the eng language notes from this site by puppy/puddy.

the notes are pretty much all you need to know for section 1 &2. 45marks right there.

essay topics, yeah they'll break all of us because we have no idea what will be on it :S .

as for your scale

 :idiot2:
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: lynt.br on November 01, 2009, 10:27:33 pm
It really depends on the essay topics for me. For some of them I can write heaps and its just a matter of working out the best examples I want to include and what I want to leave out.

I can most topics at the moment but there are a few where my example bank is a little shallow.

Sections 1 and 2 I'm not too worried about.

Really my main concern is just exam day nerves. Having already learnt this from the English exam, no matter how many practice exams you do under exam conditions, your exam essay will likely be the worst one you've ever done.
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: hyperblade01 on November 01, 2009, 10:33:31 pm
Nervous as whenever I think I'll be alright for essay topics, someone brings up a point that makes my examples and explanations not as solid as i'd think they'd be.

I'd be happy with anything over 20 out of 30 to be honest...


Section 1&2 is becoming like the other subjects - questions tend to be recycled and there's always a somewhat generic response.  :)




So I guess I'm :  :-\
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: /0 on November 01, 2009, 10:42:46 pm
Hmm yeah even though Sections 1 & 2 are repetitive somehow I drop marks whenever I get the chance... whether it be for line numbers, slightly-too-unacceptable explanations, slightly-too-unacceptable examples, or misinterpreting the text...
Oh well, maybe it's just a run of bad luck
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Post by: arthurk on November 01, 2009, 10:47:07 pm
lol slightly too unacceptable examples? is that possible
essays are a bitch for me
so much to say so little time
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Post by: ngRISING on November 01, 2009, 10:50:29 pm
do you think we'll lose a mark for each question if we forget to refer to a line in section 1 & 2? or would it be one mark in general lol
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Post by: hyperblade01 on November 01, 2009, 10:51:44 pm
Well for the essay its either too much or too little to say =.=

Hmm yeah even though Sections 1 & 2 are repetitive somehow I drop marks whenever I get the chance

Which is what happens with spesh, methods, chem etc :P


But yea, overall I'm happy I chose English language over English :)
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: appianway on November 01, 2009, 11:13:16 pm
Strangely enough, I'm not nervous. I went through a period when I was incredibly anxious, particularly because of the exceptional pressure that I was placed under, but I feel relaxed now. I guess my main concerns are that I'll misinterpret a question or that I won't have enough examples in my essay, but I'm not overly worried. This isn't to say that I'm confident that I'll get a perfect score (far from it!), but I've realised that the world won't end if I don't get a 50, 49 or 48, which is a pretty big thing coming from someone who's such a perfectionist. And if truth be told, I don't really care about the marks anymore - I'm trying to focus on enjoying myself. I guess it's a bit of a reassurance that I have English lined up for next year though...
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Post by: ngRISING on November 01, 2009, 11:16:36 pm
lol. if  do get 40+ for lang. fuck eng i reckon.

what is the intended function of a parallelism in a advertisement. ?
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: lynt.br on November 01, 2009, 11:19:16 pm
Hmm yeah even though Sections 1 & 2 are repetitive somehow I drop marks whenever I get the chance... whether it be for line numbers, slightly-too-unacceptable explanations, slightly-too-unacceptable examples, or misinterpreting the text...
Oh well, maybe it's just a run of bad luck

Yeah I hate when your answers seem logical to you but the examiner thinks otherwise. In the 2009 Insight exam, one of the questions asked what was the text's register and identify and explain features that supported my opinion. I said the text was informal and listed the use of slang and expletives as supporting evidence. My slang example was completely different to my expletive example (which was the use of "bloody" as an intensifier), however I was told that "bloody" came under slang and hence I had given two of the same examples.

Another question in the same exam asked if the text was coherent, and again to give examples that supported my opinion. I stated that coherence in this text was dependant on the audience because of the frequent use of Australian colloquialisms, idioms and in-group slang. They gave me some generic answer saying it was coherent because of things like paragraphing, formatting, headings etc. While I accept that as a valid answer, I still think my answer was more correct because formatting isn't going to help you understand a text if the content itself is indecipherable....
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Post by: appianway on November 01, 2009, 11:31:40 pm
Don't trust the Insight solutions. Your answer would've been correct (because of the reliance on inference for coherence), but it'd probably be best to consider a range of factors as contributing to the overall coherence of the text. After all, even if the audience is familiar with the semantics of the terms used, the rest of the text still has to be logical for it to make sense.
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: Damo17 on November 01, 2009, 11:54:23 pm
I am not really nervous for EL, I find that although section 1/2 questions are slightly repetitive, I always seem to lose a few marks here and there because I don't have a deep enough explanation, or as /0 "slightly-too-unacceptable explanations." 

I think the essay will be alright, I find there is always one topic similar over each exam in past years where you can use similar examples. Alot to write in such a short period of time. 

The main thing I am worried about is my knowledge of metalanguage, and certain things they might ask us in section 1/2 that I don't know.

I guess stress is less for me because I came into EL this year only looking for a 33+ just to fill up my six but now am looking at 38+ and loving this subject. 
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: ngRISING on November 02, 2009, 12:07:20 am
The main thing I am worried about is my knowledge of metalanguage, and certain things they might ask us in section 1/2 that I don't know.

I guess stress is less for me because I came into EL this year only looking for a 33+ just to fill up my six but now am looking at 38+ and loving this subject. 

dw about the metal language in unit one and two, most of the metal language in units one and two have been covered in units 3&4, probaly not on teh IPA imo.

im stressing now lol. still got 4-5 eng lang exams to do. all tomorrow. 5x2hours = gg
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: kenny17 on November 02, 2009, 12:12:25 am
I looked at the Cover page for eng lang and it says only 5 questions each for both spoken and written language. Wouldnt this mean 4-5 marks are allocated per question meaning a "deep insightful" explanation is needed for each? This would also mean no MC questions unless vcaa start to add in part a) and b) question format. (which has not really been seen in existing vcaa exams, especially in vcaa 08)

What are ur thoughts people? (this is sort of making me nervous)
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Post by: Gloamglozer on November 02, 2009, 12:17:35 am
I've heard from the VATE lecturers that it will be set out in part a), part b) etc.
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Post by: kenny17 on November 02, 2009, 12:30:29 am
ok kool, slightly less nervous then b4!
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Post by: panicky on November 02, 2009, 01:38:01 am
can anyone tell me how to talk about 'inference' when saying a text is coherent?
im confused with how to explain how it affects the coherence
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Post by: appianway on November 02, 2009, 12:16:37 pm
Something has to be assumed, or already known, for the text to make sense.
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Post by: ngRISING on November 02, 2009, 02:24:02 pm
golly gosh, 2006 vcaa was 100marks. 19 questions altogether in section 1&2. didnt finish on time . slightly off. thank god this ones only adds up to about 45 marks. the other one was 60 lol. -.-
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Post by: ngRISING on November 02, 2009, 04:45:04 pm
is semantic patterning the same as figurative language? it is right?

as well as for VCAA 07 Exam. is this response correct. the question is. Q 7

Does this speech achieve its purpose? Discuss, using linguistic evidence to support your analysis.

Following is an example of a high-scoring student response.
The speech does achieve its purpose of convincing the audience present to buy more Australian goods. His speech is entertaining, with humour used to keep his speech memorable e.g. ‘So let’s keep it legal’ (line 32). Coherence is achieved through the continuing metaphor of the cup of coffee (Line 4). The use of personal pronouns e.g. ‘we’ and ‘our’ (line 2) refer to the speaker and audience directly in an inclusive sense. The repetition of the phrase ‘Buy Australian’ drives home the main contention.


My response.
This speech achieves its purpose in persuading the audience to buy Australian by the use of constant repetition of the term "Buy Australian" [Line 1,10,14] to put emphasis on the main purpose of this speech. The speaker also uses personal pronouns such as 'I'm' [line 33], 'We' [line 2] to indicate that the speaker and audience are on one side together. There is interrogative sentences to let the audience think about what they should do, for instance in line 38, "sixty five cents worth and half a cup, or Buy Australian and receive a full cup?" The buyer also use imperative sentences to guide what the audience should do in line 43, "Buy Australian".

its out of 5 marks, the sampled response is full marks, do you guys reckon mines at least 4? thanks!
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: appianway on November 02, 2009, 05:41:44 pm
Figurative language is really just metaphor, which is semantic patterning.

What did people think of the 06 VCAA solutions? Personally, I'm wondering if there should be a bit more flexibility. I guess it's just that I thought that text 2 could also serve a persuasive function, as well as an informative one... the lexical choice (with lexemes such as dire) and fact that it was listed under a category called "why save water" seemed to suggest that it was persuading readers that water should be saved. The more recent VCAA exams seem to have less prescriptive answers though.
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Post by: ngRISING on November 02, 2009, 06:37:05 pm
hmmphs. i also wrote text 2 is a persuasive function for that one due to the comparison it makes, it points out the benefits of being water efficient[being persuasive by what you do can lead to benefits, thus you should do it]
Also the imperative sentence in line 22 assists in the persuasive function or an order i guess. "It's time to be water efficient!"

hmmph, what is function of a capitalised noun in say a terms and conditions document?
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: hyperblade01 on November 02, 2009, 07:20:18 pm
Emphasis - for example when talking about a frequent flyers card "the Card cannot be used" vs "the card cannot be used" ...

The first case is saying that is THAT card and no other...

I think my example just came from one of the insight questions - is YOUR question based on that question lol
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Post by: ngRISING on November 02, 2009, 07:25:32 pm
YEAH LOL. text 5 in the written section . yeah makes little sense to me from what insight[:idiot2:] gave me, you cleared it up
i personally dont like insights answers ^^
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Post by: TheJosh on November 02, 2009, 08:41:40 pm
So when it asks for semantic patterning, what is it actually looking for?
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Post by: emiily on November 02, 2009, 09:50:51 pm
semantic patterning can be irony, metaphor and figurative language, oxymoron, paradox, simile, symbolism, personification, puns
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Post by: ngRISING on November 02, 2009, 10:42:56 pm
hmmph, in VATE 07 that i just did, it says How do reference and semantic field establish cohesion within the text.
 I got confused because i didn't know what reference is until i read the solutions. It meant cataphoric referencing, shouldn't it be more specific?
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: brenny on November 03, 2009, 12:25:36 pm
re
hmmph, in VATE 07 that i just did, it says How do reference and semantic field establish cohesion within the text.
 I got confused because i didn't know what reference is until i read the solutions. It meant cataphoric referencing, shouldn't it be more specific?

referencing can refer to cataphoric anaphoric or any of the three deitic references (being personal, temporal or locational)
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 01:56:39 pm
what do you mean temporal?
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Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 01:59:48 pm
Was just pondering the thought but could it not be said that jargon and subcultural languages such as teenspeak and netspeak discriminate by excluding others and separating groups?
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Post by: hyperblade01 on November 03, 2009, 02:09:29 pm
what do you mean temporal?

To do with time.
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 02:14:16 pm
Was just pondering the thought but could it not be said that jargon and subcultural languages such as teenspeak and netspeak discriminate by excluding others and separating groups?

there was a newspaper article how teenagers use netspeak/acronyms to exclude their parents from knowing what they're saying online if their parents were looking or nearby. its in my eng lang book. i'll have a look soon.
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Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 02:16:39 pm
Is that a form of discrimination though that examiners will agree with?
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Post by: BiG DaN on November 03, 2009, 02:22:25 pm
Was just pondering the thought but could it not be said that jargon and subcultural languages such as teenspeak and netspeak discriminate by excluding others and separating groups?

yeah thats to do with creating group solidarity and constructing power structures – who belongs to our mob and who doesn’t – in a process of inclusion and exclusion. Outsiders will sometimes be put off by the lexicon of a jargon that is not readily comprehensible to a novice
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Post by: hyperblade01 on November 03, 2009, 02:35:51 pm
Was just pondering the thought but could it not be said that jargon and subcultural languages such as teenspeak and netspeak discriminate by excluding others and separating groups?

there was a newspaper article how teenagers use netspeak/acronyms to exclude their parents from knowing what they're saying online if their parents were looking or nearby. its in my eng lang book. i'll have a look soon.

I remember reading some ages ago:

GIMP - Get in my pants   <<< seriously, wtf?
PAW - Parents are Watching
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: /0 on November 03, 2009, 02:37:13 pm
LOL

There had better be an essay on political language/euphemisms/doublespeak I need an essay topic on those
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Post by: TheJosh on November 03, 2009, 02:46:46 pm
Hey

is the mode the means by which language is communicated across?

so an email is a mode of language?
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Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 02:54:46 pm
LOL

There had better be an essay on political language/euphemisms/doublespeak I need an essay topic on those

NEINNN!!!!
Language change over time for the win
as Broad as possible please:P
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 03:25:29 pm
http://www.theage.com.au/national/its-no-laughing-matter-as-cyberslang-rewrites-teen-literacy-20080830-465k.html?page=-1

thats something that you could use. not the article i was referring to earlier though. ah well. time to do VCAA08 & INSIGHT 08. my last few hours of english language. mfker =='. havn't looked at these yet. heres my chance.
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Post by: hyperblade01 on November 03, 2009, 03:31:08 pm
Less than 24 hours...

There has to be something on PC this year....
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 03:34:09 pm
hmmph something related to PC. examples?

stolen generation?
change of name positions in organisations . eg chairman is now chair person.
change of immigration deparment.
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Post by: BiG DaN on November 03, 2009, 03:36:09 pm
is it ok to use stimulus material from practice essays in the real thing?
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Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 03:36:23 pm
Language used to obscure the truth?
Any examples other than political stuff, i don't see how i can go on about this stuff for 3 paragraphs
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Post by: BiG DaN on November 03, 2009, 03:37:27 pm
hmmph something related to PC. examples?

stolen generation?
change of name positions in organisations . eg chairman is now chair person.
change of immigration deparment.

asylum seekers instead of refugees or illegal immigrants?
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Post by: BiG DaN on November 03, 2009, 03:38:55 pm
Language used to obscure the truth?
Any examples other than political stuff, i don't see how i can go on about this stuff for 3 paragraphs

doublespeak, euphemisms, jargon, passive voice come to mind
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 03:40:02 pm
why dont someone up with a essay topic and a stimulus material and we write one essay on it each and post it up :D . on PC
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Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 03:40:10 pm
can u give me some examples outside of politics for those mentioned?
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Post by: BiG DaN on November 03, 2009, 03:41:14 pm
why dont someone up with a essay topic and a stimulus material and we write one essay on it each and post it up :D . on PC

lol i would but today is my first day studying and i gotta do vcaa06-08 still haha
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 03:42:52 pm
can u give me some examples outside of politics for those mentioned?

euphemisms used for terrorist attacks such as the most recent one today?
Frankfurt airport terror plan  'massive' is a euphemism for Frankfurt Terrorist Attack Plot would have been deadly?

this article is the most recent as it gets LOL . today ^^
http://www.heraldsun.com.au/news/world/german-attack-plan-massive/story-e6frf7m6-1111114349493
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Post by: BiG DaN on November 03, 2009, 03:45:47 pm
can u give me some examples outside of politics for those mentioned?

euphemisms used for terrorist attacks such as the most recent one today?
Frankfurt airport terror plan  'massive' is a euphemism for Frankfurt Terrorist Attack Plan would have been deadly?

this article is the most recent as it gets LOL . today ^^
http://www.heraldsun.com.au/news/world/german-attack-plan-massive/story-e6frf7m6-1111114349493

isnt that hyperbole to create emphasis on just how much destruction would be caused by 550kg TNT?
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Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 03:51:46 pm
I wouldn't really say that's euphemistic i mean it makes u feel like it was more disastrous as Big Dan states
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 03:53:43 pm
Language has the potential to offend if used incorrectly in the wrong context or with the wrong audience. Discuss

Stimulus Material 1- The Prime Minister was "desperately" trying to connect with the Australian people by using phrases such as "fair shake of the sauce bottle", the Liberal MP said. [Herald Sun 9/6/09]

Stimulus Material 2-I was entralled,I suppose nearly describes my feeling as I watched, why when the law require the use of plain English are we burdened with this evasive use of the language??
Why don't organisations such as the A B C do their bit and revert to plain English,instead of this politically correct nonsense that seems to be slavelisy followed, I apoligise for the ramble. [7.30 Report - John Spiers]

Stimulus Material 3 -"Anybody else around here?... Ah, our little Paki friend, Ahmed." - Prince Harry [Herald Sun 21.08.09]
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 03:55:13 pm
oh okay lol. i'll look for some more that might be useful for tmorrow :D
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Post by: meepcat on November 03, 2009, 03:57:57 pm
PC Language:

“Political language … is designed to make lies sound truthful and murder respectable, and to give an appearance of solidity to pure wind.” – George Orwell, Politics and the English Language (1946)

What is the role of PC Language in the 21st Century? Does Orwell’s perception of PC language still hold true today? Discuss with reference to Australian society.

Introduction:
-   Reword the topic: PC language is a disgrace to the English language, it “makes us stupid”.
-   It makes us gullible and we believe anything we’re told
-   Orwell thinks it makes us accept horrific things as normal and acceptable
-   In the 21st Century, though, PC language does have a time and a place – but only if carefully implemented

Body:
-   For each, when are they appropriate? When is it overkill? Examples of ‘appropriate’ use vs. ‘gone too far’ – all examples should be Australian-specific if possible
o   Paragraph 1: Gender terms
                Appropriate: Chairperson
                Too far: “hir” for “his/her” (gender-neutral pronouns considered ‘ridiculous’), history / herstory
o   Paragraph 2: Age terms
                Appropriate: ‘elderly’ instead of ‘old’
                Too far: … are there any?
o   Paragraph 3: Race terms
                Appropriate: ‘Indigenous Australian’ instead of ‘Blackfella’ or ‘Abo’
                Too far: The plant ‘black boy’ being renamed ‘grass tree’?
o   Other paragraphs if necessary:
                Mental Proficiency
•   Too far? Idiots are defined as those “incapable of gaining reason” and lunatics as people only “capable of periods of lucidity”
                Perceptions of beauty (height, weight, body shape, etc)
                Stature? The little people race this year that got everyone upset (dwarves)
                Religion? “Fundamentalist” or “extremist” instead of “sociopath” etc
-   Also:
o   Comedic use:
                Parody: PC version of Little Red Riding Hood, Baa Baa ‘Rainbow’ Sheep, etc.
                Not-so-Parody: BBC states no more “offensive humour” -> would Fawlty Towers or Allo Allo be made in the current day/age? Can we really only now make fun of middle aged white men lest we offend?
                Does comedic use indicate the views of society on PC language? Can we hypothesize that PC language is by and large outdated and rejected in our modern world?
-   Contrasting views: when is PC language a positive influence? When is it necessary? How does it create a ‘polite’ society? What level of social distance necessitates PC language?

Conclusion:
-   Restatement of argument – PC language has deteriorated, but it is still necessary
-   Support with comments regarding social distance, politeness, formal situations, etc
-   Orwell may be right, but with proper use PC language has its place

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Intro:
Politically correct (PC) language is a 20th Century construct that arose out of a need to minimize the impact and effect of potentially offensive or discriminatory language. As with the intent behind the use of euphemism, PC language was initially utilised to ‘soften’ taboo or culturally offensive language in order to make it as non-offensive to the widest variety of audiences possible. The Sapir-Whorf hypothesis of how language affects the way people understand the world and behave within it contributed to the initial positive attitudes toward PC language, in that it was believed that if we refined what was ‘offensive’ to others, we would by default refine ourselves; thus creating a society with members of a higher prestige. By the late 20th Century and early 21st Century, however, PC language was viewed almost exclusively in a pejorative sense. Making ‘lies sound truthful and murder respectable’, PC language has increasingly been viewed as giving ‘an appearance of solidity to pure wind’; making the ridiculous or the extreme seem acceptable and normal. Orwell’s mid-20th Century denouement of PC language has never been more apt in Australia today; rather than being a positive contributor to communication, PC language is decried as a ‘watering down’ of the English language, cementing the deterioration of the quality of meaning contained within the semantics of the English lexis.

Conclusion:
While PC language has deteriorated to become almost a phenomenon of ridicule, it is without a doubt still a necessary part of 21st Century communicative practice. Despite Orwell’s perception that PC language, as far back in the 20th Century as 1946, fostered a degradation of meaning and thus also of society, social distance still requires a level of politeness that extends beyond euphemistic terms; the ‘softening’ of racism, ageism and sexism via lexis choice is still critical in formal situations. PC language, however, should not be used excessively, lest it cement itself in the realm of parody and satire. Through more appropriate selection of setting when using PC language, the stigma associated with it should lessen. Eventually, this should result in a decline of its pejorative sense, thus elevating its status in Australian society and cementing its role as a communicative device employed to reduce discriminatory and offensive use of language.
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Post by: BiG DaN on November 03, 2009, 04:04:43 pm
is it ok to use stimulus material from practice essays in the real thing?

any1 gonna answer this? lol
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 04:05:30 pm
what a beast. nice examples
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 04:06:06 pm
is it ok to use stimulus material from practice essays in the real thing?

any1 gonna answer this? lol

if they're real examples. like legit lol. look up the stimulus material to see if they exist.
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 04:15:03 pm
for your paragraph 2.

Quote
o   Paragraph 2: Age terms
                Appropriate: ‘elderly’ instead of ‘old’
                Too far: … are there any?

Chronologically challenged.
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Post by: /0 on November 03, 2009, 04:18:37 pm
Another euphemism:
The new bushfire warning system uses "relocate" instead of "evacuate".
This is ironic considering the bushfire report stated that
"all bushfire warnings issued in Victoria must use clear language, avoid euphemisms, and contain explicit information"
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Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 04:23:18 pm
any sites or anything to that? be good if there is lol..

nvm found one

the age - 10/09/2009
http://news.theage.com.au/breaking-news-national/new-bushfire-warning-system-unveiled-20090910-fj0m.html
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Post by: lynt.br on November 03, 2009, 04:35:24 pm
They will probably have one topic on language being used to construct identity. It just seems too hard to pass  "fair shake of the sauce bottle" as a stimulus quote.

But with three topics there should be something that most people can write about. VCAA topics are usually pretty broad and rarely focus on one area in particular, with exception to that horrible 2007 topic about speech making.

For example, rather than have a question specifically about PC language, they would phrase the question like in 2007: "Language has the power to shock, offend and incite emotion". While PC would be a central issue to discuss in that topic, its broad enough that you can flesh out your essay with euphemisms, dysphemisms etc.
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Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 05:33:17 pm
What about when they focused on jargon in particular in some year
and i think they did focus solely on PC stuff one year as well
Usually that sort of stuff fits into one paragraph but vcaa makes it an essay
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Post by: vce_09_nearly_over on November 03, 2009, 05:42:11 pm
i wanna cry atm, nothing is sticking in my head im looking @ my notes thinking what the hell :(
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: Harbourmastah on November 03, 2009, 05:42:31 pm
What about when they focused on jargon in particular in some year
and i think they did focus solely on PC stuff one year as well
Usually that sort of stuff fits into one paragraph but vcaa makes it an essay

yeah and specifically 'speech making' for 2007
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: vce_09_nearly_over on November 03, 2009, 05:47:21 pm
do people hav prac exams, they could share?? wanna do some tonight to get me in the mind set and ive done partically all the past exam papers
Thanxs in advance :)
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: lynt.br on November 03, 2009, 05:55:46 pm
What about when they focused on jargon in particular in some year
and i think they did focus solely on PC stuff one year as well
Usually that sort of stuff fits into one paragraph but vcaa makes it an essay

Jargon is a pretty big topic in itself. Remember that a lot of slang can be classifiable under jargon as well. You can look at the uses for jargon (linguistic precision, expediency, educational marker, social group marker) and misuse of jargon (To obscure, conceal, cause prolixity, create false authority, exclude).

You have areas such as profession specific jargon (medical, legal, computing, linguistic), group specific jargon (Teenspeak, surfie speak, skating speak etc) and the jargon of business and government institutions (to obscure, mislead, Jargon being used as doublespeak etc).

There should easily be enough in there to flesh out 800-1000 words of discussion with examples.

As for something solely on PC, remember you can branch out and look at euphemisms here. Look at how PC has facilitated social harmony or dulled our language. Changing attitudes towards what is considered PC.and the recent changes to promote equality. Basically if you measure up both sides of the issue, you can quite easily fill a whole essay on this topic.

2007's speech making topic was probably one of the worst I've ever seen. There's pretty much no chance that all three topics will be something like that anyway so it shouldn't be a concern. If you get a topic like this, just avoid it and go for the easier one.
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: TheJosh on November 03, 2009, 05:56:08 pm
do people hav prac exams, they could share?? wanna do some tonight to get me in the mind set and ive done partically all the past exam papers
Thanxs in advance :)

here you go
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 06:00:32 pm
What about when they focused on jargon in particular in some year
and i think they did focus solely on PC stuff one year as well
Usually that sort of stuff fits into one paragraph but vcaa makes it an essay

Jargon is a pretty big topic in itself. Remember that a lot of slang can be classifiable under jargon as well. You can look at the uses for jargon (linguistic precision, expediency, educational marker, social group marker) and misuse of jargon (To obscure, conceal, cause prolixity, create false authority, exclude).

You have areas such as profession specific jargon (medical, legal, computing, linguistic), group specific jargon (Teenspeak, surfie speak, skating speak etc) and the jargon of business and government institutions (to obscure, mislead, Jargon being used as doublespeak etc).

There should easily be enough in there to flesh out 800-1000 words of discussion with examples.

As for something solely on PC, remember you can branch out and look at euphemisms here. Look at how PC has facilitated social harmony or dulled our language. Changing attitudes towards what is considered PC.and the recent changes to promote equality. Basically if you measure up both sides of the issue, you can quite easily fill a whole essay on this topic.

2007's speech making topic was probably one of the worst I've ever seen. There's pretty much no chance that all three topics will be something like that anyway so it shouldn't be a concern. If you get a topic like this, just avoid it and go for the easier one.
Going on examiners report people were marked down for referring to anything about PC or slang in the jargon essay
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: vcestudy123 on November 03, 2009, 06:12:04 pm
what happens if we run out of lines in the essay? can we get a second booklet or something??
thanks
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: lynt.br on November 03, 2009, 06:15:20 pm
What about when they focused on jargon in particular in some year
and i think they did focus solely on PC stuff one year as well
Usually that sort of stuff fits into one paragraph but vcaa makes it an essay

Jargon is a pretty big topic in itself. Remember that a lot of slang can be classifiable under jargon as well. You can look at the uses for jargon (linguistic precision, expediency, educational marker, social group marker) and misuse of jargon (To obscure, conceal, cause prolixity, create false authority, exclude).

You have areas such as profession specific jargon (medical, legal, computing, linguistic), group specific jargon (Teenspeak, surfie speak, skating speak etc) and the jargon of business and government institutions (to obscure, mislead, Jargon being used as doublespeak etc).

There should easily be enough in there to flesh out 800-1000 words of discussion with examples.

As for something solely on PC, remember you can branch out and look at euphemisms here. Look at how PC has facilitated social harmony or dulled our language. Changing attitudes towards what is considered PC.and the recent changes to promote equality. Basically if you measure up both sides of the issue, you can quite easily fill a whole essay on this topic.

2007's speech making topic was probably one of the worst I've ever seen. There's pretty much no chance that all three topics will be something like that anyway so it shouldn't be a concern. If you get a topic like this, just avoid it and go for the easier one.
Going on examiners report people were marked down for referring to anything about PC or slang in the jargon essay

The examiners report states that people were marked down only if they deviated too far away from the topic. Slang is relevant, but it should not be the only thing you discuss, the report even brings it up as a valid discussion point:

Quote from: vcaa 2004 report
jargon marks group boundaries by defining group membership through the use of language unique to the group, such as slang and technical language

The sample high scoring essay also brought up teenspeak slang/jargon:
Quote
The jargon that we use can also promote in-group solidarity, which ensures cohesiveness because the members of the group are made aware by language where they belong. When a group is freely conversing about ‘volleys’ and ‘backhands’ they are aware that they belong to the same interest group of tennis. This knowledge can increase the closeness and familiarity within a group because the use of jargon helps the members of the group relate to each other. If a new member joins a group, they will try to immediately pick up on the jargon, so that they feel part of the group. This happens often with teenagers who want nothing more than to be included, and their lexicon will alter to ‘teen jargon’ or ‘teenspeak’ to add lexical terms such as ‘mad’ (good) or ‘wak’ (bizarre but good). Jargon creates cohesiveness because the members of an in-group will know through the use of language who belongs together
and by sharing the use of jargon a stronger social rapport is built.

The question asks to discuss the functions of both professional and popular jargon. The latter implies that jargon created within social groups to facilitate effective and efficient communication, such as slang, is a relevant discussion point.

When I was talking about PC language, that was in reference to if there was a question that focussed entirely on PC language. In a question on jargon, there should be no reason to bring up any discussion on PC language.

Also, 2004 was the old study design. From 2006 onwards, essay topics have generally been broader and less specialised or focussed on one particular topic. This is most likely going to be the case with the inclusion of stimulus material which usually encompass a range of discussion points pertinent to the topic.

what happens if we run out of lines in the essay? can we get a second booklet or something??
thanks
Yes.
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: ngRISING on November 03, 2009, 06:19:17 pm
hmmph. 800-1000 words on jargon. seems reasonable but which subsystems can i relate it to.
lexical choice to include/exclude or use jargon.
syntax mainly contained jargon then it would mean that they're fairly familiar and a regular use of the jargon?
semantics?
morphology?
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 06:20:46 pm
So are we considering slang as a subset of jargon
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: lynt.br on November 03, 2009, 06:23:08 pm
hmmph. 800-1000 words on jargon. seems reasonable but which subsystems can i relate it to.
lexical choice to include/exclude or use jargon.
syntax mainly contained jargon then it would mean that they're fairly familiar and a regular use of the jargon?
semantics?
morphology?

It's a poor type of question because you really can't expand that much from beyond lexicon. Jargon is essentially a subset of lexicon. If you really wanted to, you might be able to bring in semantics and discourse (topic matter) or morphology (abbreviations, acronyms).
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: lynt.br on November 03, 2009, 06:24:54 pm
So are we considering slang as a subset of jargon

Not a subset, but they are similar in function. It is the jargon of a specific group. Look at surfie slang "hang 10" etc (yeah I know nothing about surfing...), this also functions as surfing jargon.
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: /0 on November 03, 2009, 06:29:03 pm
I would say slang is separate from jargon. Slang is more informal, and is usually more based around group inclusion and group identity.
Jargon on the other hand is a highly technical language whose purpose is to aid communication of information. It doesn't have to be informal and while it can include/exclude, this is not its main purpose.
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: TheJosh on November 03, 2009, 06:33:27 pm
Slang would more fall under register, as register is a 'socially defined variety of language' , appropriate to a specific situation, profession or subject matter
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: arthurk on November 03, 2009, 06:35:14 pm
For the writer of the essay in the jargon response he referred to teenspeak as teenjargon...okay???
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: lynt.br on November 03, 2009, 06:35:56 pm
I would say slang is separate from jargon. Slang is more informal, and is usually more based around group inclusion and group identity.
Jargon on the other hand is a highly technical language whose purpose is to aid communication of information. It doesn't have to be informal and while it can include/exclude, this is not its main purpose.

I believe they can have a very similar function. Let me give you a terrible example:

Say a group of teenagers decide to create the phrase "dagster" which refers to someone who has poor taste in clothing. To the people within the in-group, this slang would also serve the function of aiding communication because it connotes a very clear and specific concept to that group of teenagers. This is a very similar function to jargon, which does not necessarily have to be professional (the question stated that you should explore both professional and popular jargon). The difference is that slang is generally quite informal in comparison to jargon.
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: lynt.br on November 03, 2009, 06:40:15 pm
For the writer of the essay in the jargon response he referred to teenspeak as teenjargon...okay???

But surely the examples he gave "‘mad’ (good) or ‘wak’ (bizarre but good)" would be examples of teenage slang as well?

While slang and jargon are not exactly the same thing, they can serve very similar functions. A question that asks for discussion on 'popular jargon' would to me imply discussion on how slang can be used for the same function as jargon.
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: vcestudy123 on November 03, 2009, 07:01:47 pm
what happens if we run out of lines in the essay? can we get a second booklet or something??
thanks
Yes.


thank you
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: ngRISING on November 04, 2009, 02:16:55 am
wow. its 2:16am im awake because i cant sleep. fkn english language exam has scared the living shits through me
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: eccentric on November 04, 2009, 06:37:34 am
I HAVENT SLEPT FML!
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: ngRISING on November 04, 2009, 08:05:31 am
just woke up. damn straight im nervous LOL!
Title: Re: Who else is nervous?
Post by: techhatesme on November 04, 2009, 09:34:38 am
Dear god, Language should have a day to it's self

FM + Lang will be the death of me.