I won't beg anyone for more help because there's not much more I can do now but commit this reponse to memory, practice it under timed conditions and cross my fingers that the stimulus tomorrow isn't too hard to integrate. I will, however, post my newer story in the case that someone with a lot of time up their sleeve and no better way to spend their Sunday wants to give some final feedback. But again - there are a lot of people that need help right now so I'm not expecting any reply. Thanks all!
Spoiler
It was December: the Jacarandas were in full bloom and the days were warm and sticky, like honey running down your spine. School was almost over for the year and my husband and I, both teachers and with two school-age daughters , were already in 'holiday mode', a term our family has always used to describe the feeling of long warm days in the pool and having nowhere to be. It was relaxing; life was as at its best.
The diagnosis came just before Christmas. My husband had been unwell, but in that 'holiday mode' my contentment was untouchable, and didn't think twice about it. We'd been putting up our Christmas tree together, dancing to outdated Christmas carols and wrapping each other in tinsel, when he collapsed; unconscious. After we rushed him to hospital he didn't come home for weeks. I finished decorating our Christmas tree in tears, alone.
Cancer of the bone marrow, destined to metastasise and spread into his blood and his brain. I heard those words an infinite amount of times over the year that followed but I don't know that they ever sunk in. To me, all it meant was: 'your husband will be dead within a year; make every goddamn day count'.
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Anne,
It is June of 2012. Of course it's 2012 - I won't live until 2013. When you're reading this, you'll know what happened afterwards. I got sicker, lost my speech, lost my dignity, lost my laughter, and eventually my own body killed me. You'll have been to my funeral by now, no doubt.
I can't say that I'm a total expert at writing letters, so bear with me if this is a little patchy, but my aim is for this letter to remain on this earth after I have died, to remind you of me and of what we've shared. By far the best part of this live I've had has been sharing it with you. Whenever you read this, whether it is a day or 30 years after my death, I hope you know can look back and agree with me, that we have been so very lucky to find each other in this lifetime.
I can't say everything I need to at once, but I will be back again with more to say, I'm sure.
Until then, all my love,
Steven.
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What was perhaps the hardest to grasp was how sick my husband would become during chemotherapy. In my determinedness to make our last year together one to remember, I went into what was, in hindsight, a mildly-psychotic organisational spree. Amongst everything we had planned - picnics, day-cruises, road trips, movie dates, the list goes on – what we anticipated most was the trip we had organised to revisit the Maldives; our honeymoon destination. The flights were booked and our passports were ready. The excitement of travel was upon us, but a week before we were due to leave, Steven became the sickest I had seen him. A ghastly, evil kind of sickness that came creeping up from nowhere and debilitated him. He was unable to move and was lapsing in and out of a coma in hospital, and so the call was made to cancel our trip.
Instead, I discovered new sides of my husband: sides that couldn't keep up with my energy; sides that were fully dependent on my care. Some days the greatest victory would be just for him get out of bed or take our dog for a walk, and so we learnt to cherish these moments as they were. Simply walking hand-in-hand across the golf course at sunset is one of my fondest memories of our last year together; a walk I now recreate alone at times when I miss him.
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Anne,
It is August now. I had meant to return to this letter sooner but I have been so caught up between enjoying my healthy days with you, and spending my sicker ones immobile in the hospital, that I haven't had time to write. I know it's important that I get this down on paper now, as I may never come back to it again.
I am truly sorry we didn't make our trip away; I know we wanted it more than anything. But I need you to know that it did not detract from how extraordinary this time together has been. You must know that if I ever realised how much I loved you, it was over this past year. We have been so busy with our kids, our jobs - that I know many times I would not have shown you the love I felt for you, simply because that's how life is – it's chaos, and if you're lucky, you'll come home from the chaos to sleep beside the person you love every night.
I can't thank you enough for our love. I will see you in our next life; a better one.
Forever yours,
Steven.
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5 years after his death, Anne discovered Steven's letter. She had no idea until that point that he had written her a final confession of his love, nor does he know that she is still as devoted to him as she was when he was alive. Their love now exists in the next life, for them to discover anew.