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AOS Essay Marking (Interstellar/A.S.H.O.N.E)
« on: January 25, 2018, 09:33:33 am »
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Hi Everyone,

I have written a first draft for my AOS discovery essay, and was looking for some community feedback. I personally feel that it is not up to the mark, but I dont know where to improve, as essays aren't my strong point (they're my weakest point).

I also think that I have written too much (word count is too high). Please let me know what you think, and if it is too much, suggest areas where I can cut down on information.

Thanks in advance, and good luck!

P.S. -> I used the 2016 HSC Qn
« Last Edit: January 25, 2018, 09:35:58 am by dermite »
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HSC 2018
English Advanced  
Maths Extension 1
Physics
Chemistry
Information Processes and Technology
Goal : 93 ATAR
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