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Math_ew2

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Standard English: Creative Writing
« on: September 03, 2018, 11:58:26 am »
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Hey dudes,
Would it be possible to get some feedback for my creative?
I've gotten an 11/15 for trials with the feedback - "Some lapses of language and needs a greater variety of techniques".
Not 100% sure on how to integrate more techniques without making it seem forced.

Thank you for any responses  :D :D

P.S. Sorry for any stuff ups with formatting, this is my first post/attempt at forums. :)