is semantic patterning the same as figurative language? it is right?
as well as for VCAA 07 Exam. is this response correct. the question is. Q 7
Does this speech achieve its purpose? Discuss, using linguistic evidence to support your analysis.
Following is an example of a high-scoring student response.
The speech does achieve its purpose of convincing the audience present to buy more Australian goods. His speech is entertaining, with humour used to keep his speech memorable e.g. ‘So let’s keep it legal’ (line 32). Coherence is achieved through the continuing metaphor of the cup of coffee (Line 4). The use of personal pronouns e.g. ‘we’ and ‘our’ (line 2) refer to the speaker and audience directly in an inclusive sense. The repetition of the phrase ‘Buy Australian’ drives home the main contention.
My response.
This speech achieves its purpose in persuading the audience to buy Australian by the use of constant repetition of the term "Buy Australian" [Line 1,10,14] to put emphasis on the main purpose of this speech. The speaker also uses personal pronouns such as 'I'm' [line 33], 'We' [line 2] to indicate that the speaker and audience are on one side together. There is interrogative sentences to let the audience think about what they should do, for instance in line 38, "sixty five cents worth and half a cup, or Buy Australian and receive a full cup?" The buyer also use imperative sentences to guide what the audience should do in line 43, "Buy Australian".
its out of 5 marks, the sampled response is full marks, do you guys reckon mines at least 4? thanks!