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D-Vinci

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[PHYSICS]: Student Experiment
« on: June 09, 2020, 07:55:23 am »
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Hi there,
Is it possible if you could spare a short moment of your time to annotate my report? ;D Just a heads up, don't expect much as my teacher just randomly made an experiment and I couldn't find anything to reference it. Also, I'm just horrible at writing a report in general. No matter how small, any suggestions or improvements would really be helpful to me. ;) Thank you in advance!

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Re: [PHYSICS]: Student Experiment
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2020, 03:39:02 pm »
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Hi!

I've provided annotations on the attached doc. Based on what I've read I wouldn't describe your report writing as horrible; you have things to work on but horrible is a complete misnomer.

Best of luck and please feel free to reply back with questions or clarification :)


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Re: [PHYSICS]: Student Experiment
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2020, 04:03:31 pm »
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Thank you very much, Bri. ;D

Although I have already submitted the report, I still appreciate the time and effort you spent on annotating it. I take your feedback with much relevance as it will definitely help improve my report writing, the only problem is that the document you uploaded has nothing in it.  ;)

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Re: [PHYSICS]: Student Experiment
« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2020, 04:10:54 pm »
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Thank you very much, Bri. ;D

Although I have already submitted the report, I still appreciate the time and effort you spent on annotating it. I take your feedback with much relevance as it will definitely help improve my report writing, the only problem is that the document you uploaded has nothing in it.  ;)

you're absolutely welcome!

Glad to hear that you'll benefit from it regardless :)

Oops! Thanks for letting me know - I'll try uploading again until I get it to work

Edit: success! And on the first try :P

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Re: [PHYSICS]: Student Experiment
« Reply #4 on: June 18, 2020, 04:18:54 pm »
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you're absolutely welcome!

Glad to hear that you'll benefit from it regardless :)

Oops! Thanks for letting me know - I'll try uploading again until I get it to work

Edit: success! And on the first try :P

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