English Persuasive Speech: Indigenous Poetry

[KyraG]

Hi,
I was just wondering if anyone could give me any feedback or improvements to my English Assignment, which is a persuasive speech about Indigenous poetry, which is due soon. I have to write a persuasive speech, convincing the audience to produce a TV show promoting Indigenous poetry for Harmony Week. I think mainly I need to improve on making it more engaging, persuasive and improve synthesis. I would really appreciate any help.

Thanks