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twelftholmes

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ancient history Greek World essay
« on: September 03, 2020, 04:56:29 pm »
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the question is "Account for Athens' changing relations with her allies during this period."

Here is my essay: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17UpWase6ZUSlVKQ1QMqNezjKLc09LrdUCG2Fl1eXLlU/edit?usp=sharing

I would be grateful for any feedback, particularly on the structure and depth of analysis. Also what type of mark this might give me in the HSC (if I could replicate the same kinda thing in the exam). Thanks in advance!
HSC 2020: English Advanced [71], Maths Adv [74]+ Ext [21], Physics [80], Ancient History [79], Business Studies [67]
ATAR: 68.50

round 2!!
HSC 2021: eng adv, math adv, physics, ancient history