Hey buddy
Just wanna let you know that the creative writing stuff was very easy this year, think your good to go with those
You really should study for maths and numerical reasoning though, those were pure BS today
Gondonsome year 10 maths and practice your numerical
Overall nice. Writing man, got some good vocabs, I'm just guessing the grammar mistakes are typos while typing, I don't think even 80% of people today at the exam wrote like this
I'll still be around on the website, so I might Come check some of your other pieces later
Cya
Hey Dat1Guy,
First, a huge felicitations for completing the test. Although you might get this a lot, you are indeed miles away from at least 80% of the people taking the test because you have come to request help at a site designed for VCE students.
Your writing was spectacular and all but I believe the maths would've tripped 99% of people. I heard that the test spammed maths questions at you guys.
Your experience of taking the test, will benefit everyone that reads your post experiences.
A wave of butterflies bounce around my stomach as I think of the competition I'm going against, and I believe you do too. However, at least half the people had no idea how hard the test was going to be, I know somebody in year 7, in my maths class that said he was going for MHS and has like a 60% average on maths and even worse in English.
The bottom line is, there is a huge bell curve with these tests, and although a lot of people had a confident bearing, probably because they know they're going to fail.
I have faith that you'll get in.
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Now for your review of my essays. The grammar mistakes, were unfortunately, actually careless errors I made.
I think it's the time frame that halts the basics, like my handwriting flops
and my normal spelling and grammar literally takes a flop.
I think, once I get used to it, I'll be able to do it better.
Thanks for the suggestion.
Definitely stay around
I need all the motivation I get if I'm going to try to do this until the test for next year.
As I've previously mentioned, you can just enjoy a piece that a stranger has put a lot of effort into. Kind of like a book
But, even putting down a smiley face tells me that people are (hopefully) enjoying my essays.
Otherwise, general tips like what you've done is fantastic
I should spend less time writing these,
I can't believe how much time goes by as I reply.
Anyway,
congratulations for dealing with the pressure of the MHS test!
I'll hopefully, see you around.
Not physically, as in read your messages.
A few grammar and punctuation mistakes here and there. Sorry, my head is hurting from today's exam and I just... ;A; I'm a bit curious about that 60% thing. Is that based off on prior knowledge, or did you make it up on the spot?
Quoted off my English tutor:
- Research the "appeals" and stuff for rhetorical questions. It's a bit like guilt tripping.
- Look at the "common" words that you're using right now and search up synonyms for them. Just make sure you use them in the right context!
- Remember that this is a formal essay so avoid colloquial language.
Hey COLORS!
As I've said to Dat1Guy, a huge congratulations for finishing the test! I'd like to extend the felicitations by giving you a frog.
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As for your corrections, I agree with all of your suggestions.
However, I'm not so sure what you mean by appeal? the thingo
If you could explain that, that would be fantastic.
The grammatical mistakes aren't typos unfortunately, they are my errors that I made.
Will try to improve on that, I think it will help once I'm more used to the timeline.
Moderator action: merged posts, do not make multiple posts in a row in the future, thanks