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Title: physics SI
Post by: jasmine24 on June 01, 2021, 11:14:43 am
Hi, would anybody be able to give feedback on my student experiment? I've highlighted teacher feedback in yellow as i don't really understand how to fix the problems she pointed out. Like, for example, I'm not sure how to make my research question more specific or how to consider more risks when the experiment is very low risk. Also, I'm about 200 words over the word count so i would appreciate any help in cutting it down  :)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NCBnAt2pjDbtN_KIQe7jz_LbmnBuA51aC-jYnylgrVs/edit
Title: Re: physics SI
Post by: K.Smithy on June 01, 2021, 01:47:43 pm
Hey Jasmine24,
I've attached some feedback - I hope it helps :)
Give us a shout if you have any questions
Katelyn
Title: Re: physics SI
Post by: jasmine24 on June 01, 2021, 08:13:07 pm
Hey Jasmine24,
I've attached some feedback - I hope it helps :)
Give us a shout if you have any questions
Katelyn
thank you so much, i appreciate it a lot!
Title: Re: physics SI
Post by: jasmine24 on June 04, 2021, 02:15:31 pm
Hey Jasmine24,
I've attached some feedback - I hope it helps :)
Give us a shout if you have any questions
Katelyn
Hi, I've changed my improvements/extensions and was wondering if you could read over them. Especially with the last extension as I'm not really sure if it is one but also, i cant really think of any other ones
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lAuP_9Io-OTyMKDXrkR0HZyGLMeob43_PCEwWxT6cAs/edit?usp=sharing
thank you!
Title: Re: physics SI
Post by: K.Smithy on June 04, 2021, 06:28:45 pm
Hi, I've changed my improvements/extensions and was wondering if you could read over them. Especially with the last extension as I'm not really sure if it is one but also, i cant really think of any other ones
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lAuP_9Io-OTyMKDXrkR0HZyGLMeob43_PCEwWxT6cAs/edit?usp=sharing
thank you!

Hope this helps :)
Title: Re: physics SI
Post by: jasmine24 on June 04, 2021, 08:56:38 pm
Hope this helps :)
thank u :) :