NEED HELP WITH CREATIVE!!

[laurannn]

Please feel free to provide advice + sentences to add or exclude etc. I want to describe the setting for the first paragraph of my creative. I also want to include the following: moon, trees, crows, facial expressions, clothing and tombstones. here it is-

I observe the trees swaying as I walk restlessly along a cold toned pavement directing me to a crowd full of familiar faces. I stand firm beside them while my black clothing blends in with the rest, reflecting the hues and tones of the sky. I suddenly feel my mother’s dainty hand wrap itself seamlessly around mine. I don’t think twice about looking towards her as I know her eyes will be filmed and swollen while her lips quiver from the loss of hope. A flock of crows look towards the engraved names, birth dates and death dates on slabs of slate stones. The moon was the only beam of light around us all. 

[Samueliscool223]

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