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Title: Let's write a story together
Post by: BigAl on January 28, 2013, 07:17:28 pm
Very easy game. All you have to do is look at the comment above and make the story flow. Everything is allowed except insulting genre, nationality etc

I'm starting
It was a very cold night. Jones spent his whole day at his office, working on an important project. He finally made his way home and missed his wife and kids
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: alondouek on January 28, 2013, 08:51:05 pm
who had left him years before. Almost lost in his pensive thoughts, he pushed open the front door, not noticing that it had uncharacteristically been left ajar. Tiredly, he walked to the door of his study, and placed his briefcase in the threshold. Jones reached for the light-switch, but found it unresponsive. Through the gloom and the shadows that danced on the walls, he saw the silhouette of a man, seated in his desk chair.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: REBORN on January 28, 2013, 08:55:33 pm
"I've been expecting you." The voice came from the man.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: walkec on January 28, 2013, 08:58:10 pm
"Why, why have you been expecting me all this time?" Asked Jones.
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Post by: alondouek on January 28, 2013, 09:07:07 pm
"That's very forward of you" laughed the silhouette, "I've come to make you an offer Mr. Jones, and it would be in your best interests to hear me out."

A group of red dots appeared on Jones' chest, swarming towards his heart.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: BigAl on January 28, 2013, 09:55:10 pm
"I've found the traces of your family" said the silhouette . "They have been captured by a mafia and sold to one of the tribes in Africa". Jones stopped for a moment...he knew what it would be like being trapped. He, too, got trapped in his granddad's barn in Tasmania when he was 5
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: SING on January 31, 2013, 05:59:14 pm
It was a scary experience, one which left him scarred for life. This was what happened... Read on if you dare.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: alondouek on January 31, 2013, 06:03:45 pm
Way to shatter the fourth wall  ;) Now back to the story:
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: Daenerys Targaryen on February 10, 2013, 07:11:39 pm
He was too young to know any survival skills to escape his granddads barn; but now as a 42 year old he is very nimble at tying knots. The red dots on his shirts soon englufs the white only to leave red liquid dripping on the floor joining the puddle that surrounds his feet.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: SING on February 10, 2013, 09:52:16 pm
Why do the red dots become red liquid that drips on the floor, joining the puddle that surrounds his feet? Well, I'll tell you now. It is due to the fantastically chemically advanced shirt that
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: brenden on February 10, 2013, 11:22:21 pm
screams "AWWW HELLLL NO MUTHAFUCKA" when you drop a piece of chocolate from a choc-top on it at the movies. He looked down at the puddle that was slowly spreading in a way he couldn't predict. He looked up at the silhouetted man and tilted his head to the side. "What the fuck did you just say about me, you fucking little bitch? I'll have you know I graduated top of my class in the Navy Seals and I have over 300 confirmed kills."
The silhouette wiggled with rage.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: BigAl on February 10, 2013, 11:26:11 pm
My mates call me Tasmania jones..I've escaped from so deadly scenes...You think you know me? continued Tasmania jones
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: SING on February 11, 2013, 09:00:39 pm
"Oh yes I do, I even know every single one of your most intimate secrets." replied the silhouette, sneering.

Tasmania's bravado vanished in a blink of the eye.

"Whhhooo ... aaaaare ... yooouuuu?" he stuttered nervously, fiddling with the bottom of his shirt, his hands exuding litres of cold sweat.

The shadow threw back its head and laughed unnervingly. "You may not want to know, but I will tell you. I am
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: alondouek on February 11, 2013, 09:03:12 pm
The Eggman. I am the Walrus. One might even say that I am the Goo Goo G'joob. And I have a job for you.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: SING on February 11, 2013, 09:11:36 pm
"Whaaaat job?" he stammered, his hands wetting the hem of his shirt.

"A dangerous and terrifying one, but one you must undertake if you are ever to see your family again."

"Anything, anything, I'll do anything for my dear wife and baby son." he whispered.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: brenden on February 12, 2013, 01:45:20 am
"Anything?"
"Anything."
The silhouette punched the space above his head with one arm and grabbed his hip with the other. Such a disco pose in such a dark room was... ominous, to say the least. He brought the hand that was in the air down slowly, until it was level with Tasmania's head. It was the scariest of points. A point to end all point.
"If you'll do anything, then -" the silhouette began to rap
"Dance, bitch.
Dance like yo never danced befo'
If you wanna see your kids, son
Then you don't stop dancin' til yo body hit the flo'
You think you're a badass - but there can only be one
Boyyyyyyy, you been a naughty girl, you let your knickers down
Mannnn, you make my stomach curl, you thought you could take this crown?
I'm the one true Eggman, motherfucker, but I've a shell you can't crack
So you better get your fucking dance on and quit talkin' smack,
You're whack, like an old man with a crink in his back and not a ball in the sack
Ha - Cone of death? Bitch I can rip twenty
Yeah you heard me, I'll rip plenty in one breath
Now you better get yo' dance on like you just took some meth
Or I'll shoot your fucking family,
One, two and three
Once I get started there's no dancing to stop my killing spree
So make your decision motherfucker...
What will it be?"

Jones stood, stunned. He tentatively asked: "Is there an alternative?"
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: alondouek on February 12, 2013, 02:03:28 am
"Well, that depends," said the silhouette slowly, apparently no longer pseudo-rapping in a batshit crazy manner. "Can you knit?".

"No..." whimpered Jones, becoming more and more perplexed by the minute.

"WELL THEN YOU'RE NOT MUCH FUCKING USE, ARE YOU?" roared the silhouette.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: brenden on February 12, 2013, 02:05:41 am
(fucking dies of laughter)
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: SING on February 13, 2013, 11:51:55 pm
Jones jumped backward, frightened. Then suddenly, he remembered part of a reply that his mother had written for him years ago in preparation for a scholarship interview and insisted that he memorise back to front.

In a solemnly grave voice, he intoned, "Sir/Madam, I may not be able to contribute much to the music department of your brilliantly fantastic school, but aside from that, I am a Jack of all trades, master of all. And pray take especial notice of the all. I can chop firewood, read story books to toddlers, sort through cookies (albeit by getting rid of them all *Ahem ahem*), copy out your maths notes, sing like a frog, arrange flowers badly, drop every piece of expensive porcelain, eat horses for dinner, spill whiteout all over the place, study the art of hacking computers for 15 hours straight, apply sunscreen throughly, spring-clean better than Mum, sew crookedly and of course, above all my other talents, sleep like a log for 12 hours every night.

And it was the silhouette's time to f***ing die of laughter.

"So didya get the scholarship?" the shadow asked, recovering from his sudden eruption.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: grannysmith on June 21, 2013, 10:35:48 am
"No," sobbed Jones, his eyes flooding with tears. "Wait - you said -  you said you knew every single detail of my life," he stuttered, "then how come you don't know this one?"

"Ahh, yeah, I kinda lied about that," the silhouette replied. He cracked with laughter, and instantaneously, whipped out his Blackberry Z10. "Wanna play some games?"

"Hah, you sucker. That have no game, yo."

"Really?"

"Really." Jones immediately took out his oversized Note. "This baby on the other hand, smashes yo pewny toy."

And they played.

(LOL, Bendren, how long did it take to come up with that rap?)
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: SING on July 07, 2013, 04:04:18 pm
Quite unexpectedly, a long and wriggly jelly-like leech crawled out of the silhouette's fist, puffing angrily and brandishing what looked like a large bottle of sparkling mineral water.

Sniffing, he said, "Don't ask me why I live in that guy's fist. Don't ask me why I have a water bottle. And don't ask me why I can talk, because I am thoroughly sick and tired of stupid, nosy scientist-humans asking me why this, and why that."

"But what--"

"AND DON'T ASK ME WHAT I'M DOING EITHER!"

With that angry exclamation, the leech took a hearty swig out of his water bottle and proceeded to dump the rest of its contents on the Blackberry Z10 and the brand new Samsung GALAXY Note 8.0.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: datfatcat on July 29, 2013, 01:34:09 am
"Oh no," Jones screamed.  "The Note - all the money that I spent - do you know how hard to earn money nowadays? I sold all my god damn adventure stories to VCAA so that I could buy this brand new Note. And now this."
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: HakunaMattata on December 20, 2013, 03:54:23 pm
Jones huffed, faced the wall and started to dance ludicrously. He swirled his hips, stomped his feet and threw his hands up in the air. The silhouette looked puzzled. "Uh, what are you doing dude?"
"I'm trying to overcome my anger. Now unless you don't think of this as a form of seduction, you'll join me." Answered a distracted Jones.
The silhouette shrugged and proceeded to mother-fucking own that dance floor.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: peridotleaves on December 24, 2013, 12:44:32 am
Jones stepped backwards, alarmed by the silhouette's half-crazed gyrating. He felt something squish beneath his expensive leather shoes, and gasped.

It was the leech.

And it was had been ballroom dancing.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: Dreamweaver on January 09, 2014, 12:31:14 am
Quote from: peridotleaves on December 24, 2013, 12:44:32 am
Jones stepped backwards, alarmed by the silhouette's half-crazed gyrating. He felt something squish beneath his expensive leather shoes, and gasped.

It was the leech.

And it was had been ballroom dancing.

The leech took over the floor and started seducing the people in the room with its peculiar style of ballroom dancing, it was terrifying and oddly to watch. It started to dance closer and closer to
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Post by: lolaishappy on January 04, 2015, 03:20:04 pm
the food table, "my oh my what scrumptious food" WHEN a frog came out of nowhere and slipped its tongue around the leech and swallowed it up.
"Yes what scrumptious food" said the sneaky frog, and
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Post by: vobinhood on January 04, 2015, 04:32:38 pm
hopping his way back to his initial place, he vanished into the shadows.

As he noticed the leech being eaten, the silhouette let out a terrifying bawl, "MY BELOVED LEECHY!" He then fell to the ground and added to the size of the puddle with his salty tears.

Jones frantically stepped back and forth in a debate with himself as to whether he should comfort the Egg man. Then, with one, giant leap towards the right, Jones began to dance.

The Egg man heard footsteps rhythmically pattering upon the floor board. Slowly, he tilted his head up and to discern
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: lolaishappy on January 17, 2015, 07:00:19 pm
He saw the most roundest egg woman. Her yolks must be yellow as the sun. He shyed away from the idea. But he curved his back and took leaps of faith to the egg woman. He introduced himself. "Good evening m'lady"
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: Immune_Sushi on June 21, 2016, 09:08:19 pm
(Ill try my best to make the story flow...)


In an instant every figure froze, as if time stopped flowing itself.


Unable to comprehend what was happening, Jones fell into the temptation into touching the Eggman's face.

"Bang!", Mr Jones felt a sharp pain in his head, and his five sense

The Eggman's face distorted into a man with a sharp and sinister looking face.

"The hallucinants are working too well, Mr Jones here seems to be hallucinating about Leeches and cartoon characters" The Man remarked.

Trying to distract himself with the man's continuously distorting face, Jones examined his surroundings; he was in a van with 6 other people and bags of weaponry.

"Where am I!? What am I doing here?!" Jones demanded in a sheepish voice.

With a smirk, the sinister man replied "Oh... you will know soon enough... but, sadly it is classified at the moment "

Finally with an abrupt stop, the man instructed Jones to get off the vehicle, to his amazement, Jones saw...

Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: heids on June 22, 2016, 08:19:06 am
nothing.

From the van, all Jones could see was a vast expanse of open nothingness - no land, no sea, no sky.  Simply nothing.  He began to wonder if he was truly real.

A staggering blow to the back of his head reassured him of his reality.  'Get out, scum!' screamed his captor.

Jones felt a ball of cold anger explode in his stomach.  With a sudden sense of invincibility, born of his long experience with the Navy Seals, Quetzacotl tribes, and most terrifying of all, two-headed Tasmanians (statist isn't as unacceptable as racist, yeah?) he turned to face his opponent with a deadly calm.

'Do you know what I think?' he uttered scornfully.  'I think...'
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Post by: Immune_Sushi on June 23, 2016, 06:45:42 pm
Quote
nothing.

From the van, all Jones could see was a vast expanse of open nothingness - no land, no sea, no sky.  Simply nothing.  He began to wonder if he was truly real.

A staggering blow to the back of his head reassured him of his reality.  'Get out, scum!' screamed his captor.

Jones felt a ball of cold anger explode in his stomach.  With a sudden sense of invincibility, born of his long experience with the Navy Seals, Quetzacotl tribes, and most terrifying of all, two-headed Tasmanians (statist isn't as unacceptable as racist, yeah?) he turned to face his opponent with a deadly calm.

'Do you know what I think?' he uttered scornfully.  'I think...'


"I think you should fuc.."  "Rat-tat-tat-tat-tat-tat-tat!", bullets whizzed above Jones head, convincing him that his delusional fantasy of fighting of his captors is mere stupidity.

Taking advantage of the captor's "new-found respect", the captor taunted: "Where do you think your wife and kids are huh?" "They simply don't exist!" he added scornfully.

Before Jones could respond,the driver exitted the vechicle and faced towads Mr Jones, he asked politely: "Captain, agent Jones, do you remember me? I'm Nojima, your partner during the resistance movement remember?"

Jones responded Nojima with a blank and confused stare.

"It is ******* useless, he has already been brainwashed multiple times by the "Indoctrinate". Remarked the man angrily, "Let's give up and shoot him already, he is the property of the "Indoctrinate", I don't want them to know that we exist and..."

Nojima interrupted: "Sir, let's give him another chance, let him rest for the night, I've already ordered Private Ryan to set up the tents, then we shoot him in the morning."

"In the head." The man added.

Jones finally found the courage to talk "Liars! There is no such thing as the "Indoctrinate" and there is no such thing as the "resistance movement", I have lived a happy life under utopia with our current government, if the "Indoctrinate" existed, woulnt it create a dystopian society, and thus everyone be aware of that?"

"Oh, you see.." The man said, "How many of your memories are unhappy memories?"

Jones replied: "I dont have any unhappy memories, because the "Indoctrinate" doesnt exist at all!"

 "When was our current government elected, Jones?" The man asked.

"About 20 years ago,why?" Jones Replied.

"Try to remember Jones" The man added impatiently.

Jones reflected his childhood, teen years, adulthood, marriage, his employment and up till his kidnapping. He immediately realised that his adulthood was much more happier than his childhood. Scanning through his memories, he remembers being abused by his grandfather in his barn, then dropped out of school , neglected and ditched by his parents at the age of 8. Jones scans further into the future, the new government has just been elected, anti-cancer vaccines were being deployed, global peace treaties were being signed, his grandfather suddenly disappears and parents after some 16 years reappear again.

"Something is just wrong" Jones remarked.

"Did you remember the day you took the anti-cancer vaccine?" The man asked, now in a more sincere tone.

"The vaccines were designed so that the doctors were able to...






Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: heids on June 24, 2016, 09:22:04 pm
"...take more days off due to reduced cancer incidence in the population."

Taken aback with shock, Jones felt the sudden anger well up once more.

"So you mean... you mean... vaccines... that's what the government has created them for?!  To reduce incidence of diseases?  Like... wtf?  So those damn lazy doctors can get time off?  I guess the government needs to keep them happy, though, hah.  Voters, influential in society, yeah, I see.  Outrageous!  I'm just not going to stick out this ridiculously unjust corruption.  Down with the vaccines!"

The man gave a cynically jaded chuckle.

"You guessed it, mate.  Yeah.  That's how messed up our society has become."
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Post by: Immune_Sushi on June 24, 2016, 09:39:14 pm


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"So you mean... you mean... vaccines... that's what the government has created them for?!  To reduce incidence of diseases?  Like... wtf?  So those damn lazy doctors can get time off?
(uh heidii, your logical reasoning baffles me  :))
"This is what happens when democracy is run by idiots!" The man added.


(Come on guys, it shouldnt be just me and Heidii writting the entire story)
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: geminii on June 24, 2016, 10:28:55 pm
Quote from: cyckyt0 on June 24, 2016, 09:39:14 pm
(Come on guys, it shouldnt be just me and Heidii writting the entire story)

(Trust me, I would add, but the storyline has just gotten so complex, I'm lost)
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: heids on June 24, 2016, 10:50:31 pm
off-topic
Quote from: AceVCE777 on June 24, 2016, 10:28:55 pm
(Trust me, I would add, but the storyline has just gotten so complex, I'm lost)
wait, there's a storyline?!  news to me

nah lol, join in anyways, you just have to read the one before, don't have to have a clue what's goin' on :P

Quote from: cyckyt0 on June 24, 2016, 09:39:14 pm
(uh heidii, your logical reasoning baffles me  :))
duhhhh, that's the aim ;)
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: Bookworm101 on September 05, 2016, 08:01:33 pm
A gun materialised from thin air and rested snugly into the stranger's hand.
Tasmania??? breathed in deeply, realising the situation he/she??? was in.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: Bookworm101 on September 05, 2016, 08:02:00 pm
Question: is Tasmania a boy or a girl?
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Post by: studybuddy7777 on September 05, 2016, 08:12:20 pm
Lets call them Bob because we know Bob is a male. Btw, this must have been a great thread (lol its from June though and now it's September)

Quote from: Bookworm101 on September 05, 2016, 08:01:33 pm
A gun materialised from thin air and rested snugly into the stranger's hand.
Bob breathed in deeply, realising the situation he was in.

He had the power to change everything with a single squeeze of the trigger. What he did next would surprise everyone, even those closest to him..
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: HighTide on September 05, 2016, 08:13:14 pm
Quote from: Bookworm101 on September 05, 2016, 08:01:33 pm
A gun materialised from thin air and rested snugly into the stranger's hand.
Tasmania??? breathed in deeply, realising the situation he/she??? was in.
It was Tasmania Jones! He had been walking through an ice-covered region of Greenland when he found a large ice cylinder that was made a thousand years ago by the Vikings. The cylinder had a height of h metres and a diameter of d metres. Tasmania Jones found that the volume of the cylinder was 216 m3. At that time, 1 January 2010, the cylinder had not changed in a thousand years. It was exactly as it was when the Vikings made it.

Moderator Comment: HighTide, please refrain from using mathematics related posts on the "fun" forum.
Title: Re: Let's write a story together
Post by: sweetiepi on September 05, 2016, 08:20:58 pm
But then, alas! Tasmania Jones never returned for another instalment in 2015, however, the tribe of 2016 methods students await his return of his adventures, along with the first exams of the new study design, where HighTide will never have to use maths again.