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Title: Essay help
Post by: Damo17 on March 10, 2009, 10:18:58 pm
"Nothing excludes a person more effectively than not understanding the language of a particular group." Discuss with reference to Australian Society.

What could be some main points that you could talk about?
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: jackinthepatch on March 10, 2009, 10:31:43 pm
A particular group (to reference Australian society maybe a group of farmers or something lol) may use jargon specific to their field of employment (farming), which would exclude people outside of that field who would not understand what was being said.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: sick muzza on March 10, 2009, 10:37:25 pm
some lingo was created by certain ethnicities, as they did not have words for things like 'backyards' in their homeland, so they would use a word like 'yarda'when speaking their native tongue. this lead to many people not understanding what they were saying, and a cultural divide between those people who knew the lingo and those that didnt.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: sick muzza on March 10, 2009, 10:38:11 pm
p.s. ask him ^^^^^ if ya want more, he might be able to help you out with that, jackinthepatch has a better memory than me.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: jackinthepatch on March 10, 2009, 10:41:39 pm
Yeah good point Watto.

You could also talk about how Australian English uses many idioms and slang, that would not be understood by people who didn't speak Australian English.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: Damo17 on March 10, 2009, 10:44:56 pm
Thanks guys, that has really helped.  :D
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: jackinthepatch on March 10, 2009, 10:50:38 pm
No worries mate (Y)
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: Damo17 on March 15, 2009, 10:39:39 am
Another practice essay:

"Age, Race/Ethnicity and Gender are the three key determinants of language use." Do you agree?

I do have some idea's but it would be very helpful for any contributions. Thanks in advance.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: jackinthepatch on March 15, 2009, 10:50:21 am
Do you agree or disagree?
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: Damo17 on March 15, 2009, 10:55:36 am
Do you agree or disagree?

I would agree with it at this point in time.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: jackinthepatch on March 15, 2009, 11:09:44 am
Oh yeah thought so lol, just checking haha.

Ok...

Age is a determinant because:

Ethnicity is a determinant because:

Gender is a determinant because:

Um...I'll add more when I think of it lol.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: Damo17 on March 15, 2009, 11:15:15 am
Thanks that is very helpful. I had the first point under age, I had a rough idea on the 3rd point under ethnicity and the 2nd point under gender which my teacher actually told me. Just needed a bit more to talk about. Thanks soo much again.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: jackinthepatch on March 15, 2009, 11:17:48 am
Yeah naa no worries mate, hope it helped.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: kenny17 on March 17, 2009, 06:24:34 pm
ur a smart fella jack in the patch
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: jackinthepatch on March 17, 2009, 06:26:53 pm
Haha cheers mate.
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: kenny17 on March 17, 2009, 06:54:45 pm
ur luky damian u can copy everyones elses points since ur practiacally last anyways
and u have an extra week
DAM U!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: Damo17 on March 17, 2009, 06:58:22 pm
ur luky damian u can copy everyones elses points since ur practiacally last anyways
and u have an extra week
DAM U!!!!!!!

Lol, I already made up my essay for that topic but as I thought it was a practice one I didn't make it long enough or deep enough for an oral. But I wouldn't copy others points as I probably already have enough. Looking for it to be about 1500 words or so.

But I'm happy now! :2funny: The perks of having a last name starting with V! LOL
Title: Re: Essay help
Post by: Damo17 on March 17, 2009, 09:04:04 pm
Can anyone give me a good definition of 'Gaol Gang' used back in 1700's and 1800's?