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Title: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Cinnah on November 10, 2011, 10:58:19 am
http://www.theage.com.au/national/education/sloppy-copy-in-exam-raises-ire-20111109-1n7eo.html

Just in case you wanted to know, and hadn't heard already.
Yes, karma is certainly a bitch.
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 11:10:20 am
The Age on September 23 last year, which argued that tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality.


OMG is this the contention!?!?!?!?!?!??!?! so it's not that tattoos are meaningless... oh my god please be true!
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 11:20:48 am
SOMEONE RECONFIRM THE CONTENTION PLEASU
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 11:21:52 am
lol...Helen would be angry...
so i hope everyone gets 10/10 LA haha (highly likely........................)
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Cinnah on November 10, 2011, 11:22:55 am
I confirm with what I thought,
I assumed the contention was that single line in bold, after the heading.
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: DisaFear on November 10, 2011, 11:25:40 am
Nice find
So where's Helen's tatts? :o
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 11:28:41 am
somewhere you can't see ;)
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 11:30:40 am
I confirm with what I thought,
I assumed the contention was that single line in bold, after the heading.
sorry cant find, just tell me plz?
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: burbs on November 10, 2011, 11:33:39 am
There's a bit more discussion here and here. Thanks for posting this.
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 11:36:49 am
still in search for the correct contention :C!
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Cinnah on November 10, 2011, 11:37:59 am
If you look at the booklet with the article, there's a sentence in bold before the article starts?
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 11:42:12 am
I RIPPED MY EXAM IN TEARS?

if i recall correctly, this should be right:

tattoos are more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality.


Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Cinnah on November 10, 2011, 11:56:05 am
That's pretty much it. :)
Or what I thought, anyway.
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zafaraaaa on November 10, 2011, 01:32:31 pm
From the article itself:
Quote
..which argued that tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality.

Contention?!  :-\

Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: jane1234 on November 10, 2011, 02:04:53 pm
Hahaha - that article + the comments + her picture made me laugh...

"An op-ed piece commissioned by The Age was given the fake by-line 'Helen Day', some seriously shitty 'youth' editing and turned over to a horde of 18-year-olds who have joined ''We hate Helen'' pages by the thousands..."

So we're a horde of 18-year-olds? And the original article wasn't much better than the altered one...
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 03:36:45 pm
From the article itself:
Quote
..which argued that tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality.

Contention?!  :-\



im hopin
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Ghost! on November 10, 2011, 03:50:31 pm
From the article itself:
Quote
..which argued that tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality.

Contention?!  :-\



im hopin

Yes. The contention of the 2011 LA was that 'tattoos, whilst once a representation of deviance and criminality, are now merely a simplistic fashion statement.'
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 03:54:57 pm
From the article itself:
Quote
..which argued that tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality.

Contention?!  :-\



im hopin

Yes. The contention of the 2011 LA was that 'tattoos, whilst once a representation of deviance and criminality, are now merely a simplistic fashion statement.'

i a bit off but still grateful
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: burbs on November 10, 2011, 03:55:57 pm
From the article itself:
Quote
..which argued that tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality.

Contention?!  :-\



im hopin

Yes. The contention of the 2011 LA was that 'tattoos, whilst once a representation of deviance and criminality, are now merely a simplistic fashion statement.'

Correct, but I would go a littttle further and say that this change is reducing the cultural and historical significance of tattoos.
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 04:04:22 pm
my goodness, i'm going to hunt down kids who fkn assured me that the contention was:

tattoos lost meaning and are pointless.
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: burbs on November 10, 2011, 04:26:09 pm
my goodness, i'm going to hunt down kids who fkn assured me that the contention was:

tattoos lost meaning and are pointless.

You aren't toooo far off, don't worry.
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 04:40:18 pm
my goodness, i'm going to hunt down kids who fkn assured me that the contention was:

tattoos lost meaning and are pointless.

You aren't toooo far off, don't worry.

i wrote that what tatts stand for have changed (from a sign of criminality/difference => a fashion enhancement).
for some reason, i  didn't get an impression from the writer saying that tatts are pointless and meaningless (except the last lines) BUT, for me the overriding contention was that it has now changed meaning... LOL.. damn vcaa
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Panicmode on November 10, 2011, 07:31:08 pm
OMG laughed SOOOOOOO hard XD. Like seriously, I'm not even joking. Reading this made me just burst into laughter. I am hoping for a formal apology in the exam paper like that which has happened in previous years.
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Anon123 on November 10, 2011, 07:40:20 pm
Karma for giving me a shit context prompt and an even worse LA. Suck it VCAA.
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: dylanb48 on November 10, 2011, 08:05:51 pm
Have a teacher who is an assessor and said during the meeting their was a lot of debate over the suitability if the article for language analysis and as such have been told to go a lot easier on marking then in previous years. However to get high marks you had to get the contention right whilst saying she contended tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality is partially right. She said they made it clear you had to also note she was unhappy about this and it means they have lost meaning
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zafaraaaa on November 10, 2011, 08:21:32 pm
Have a teacher who is an assessor and said during the meeting their was a lot of debate over the suitability if the article for language analysis and as such have been told to go a lot easier on marking then in previous years. However to get high marks you had to get the contention right whilst saying she contended tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality is partially right. She said they made it clear you had to also note she was unhappy about this and it means they have lost meaning

So we wouldn't automatically get like 5/10 if we only mentioned the first part of that contention you stated, but otherwise gave a decent analysis + incorporated the comments and images?? I thought the contention was like half the mark LOL
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Zebra on November 10, 2011, 08:27:20 pm
Have a teacher who is an assessor and said during the meeting their was a lot of debate over the suitability if the article for language analysis and as such have been told to go a lot easier on marking then in previous years. However to get high marks you had to get the contention right whilst saying she contended tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality is partially right. She said they made it clear you had to also note she was unhappy about this and it means they have lost meaning

my hope has plummeted
Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: Panicmode on November 10, 2011, 11:02:27 pm
Have a teacher who is an assessor and said during the meeting their was a lot of debate over the suitability if the article for language analysis and as such have been told to go a lot easier on marking then in previous years. However to get high marks you had to get the contention right whilst saying she contended tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality is partially right. She said they made it clear you had to also note she was unhappy about this and it means they have lost meaning

HOLY FUCK THAT'S EXACTLY WHAT I WROTE!!!!!! YESH!

Title: Re: VCAA MADE AN OOPSIE
Post by: dylanb48 on November 12, 2011, 12:03:44 am
Have a teacher who is an assessor and said during the meeting their was a lot of debate over the suitability if the article for language analysis and as such have been told to go a lot easier on marking then in previous years. However to get high marks you had to get the contention right whilst saying she contended tattoos were more a fashion symbol than a sign of deviance and criminality is partially right. She said they made it clear you had to also note she was unhappy about this and it means they have lost meaning

So we wouldn't automatically get like 5/10 if we only mentioned the first part of that contention you stated, but otherwise gave a decent analysis + incorporated the comments and images?? I thought the contention was like half the mark LOL

Not necessarily she said they went a lot easier so something that in the past would of got 5/10 was getting a 6 you just needed to get the contention right for a high range response 8-10. Also forgot they said analysing the comments were a must.