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VCE Stuff => VCE English Studies => VCE Subjects + Help => VCE English & EAL => Topic started by: k31453 on May 07, 2012, 09:11:31 am

Title: Check My ESl Work Please
Post by: k31453 on May 07, 2012, 09:11:31 am

I have done a practise essay so can anybody check my essay its on twelve angry men :-----

Title: Re: Check My ESl Work Please
Post by: teacher28 on May 09, 2012, 08:56:38 am

Here you are... green: my correction or addition

red: delete or change

Some points: introduce your quotes or insert them smoothly.

Write in the present tense.

Don't use contractions.

Title: Re: Check My ESl Work Please
Post by: k31453 on June 01, 2012, 02:47:37 pm

Quote from: teacher28 on May 09, 2012, 08:56:38 am

Here you are... green: my correction or addition

red: delete or change

Some points: introduce your quotes or insert them smoothly.

Write in the present tense.

Don't use contractions.

How much you rekon i should get mark for this essay out of 10 ???

My teacher give me 5.5 for that ..