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1) Stop relying on your ability to "fluke" an exam - it didn't really work for your midyears, given that you are ranked top in biology but only got a B+.
NOBODY can fluke an exam without studying.
2) Work on your procrastination issues. A good method is to promise yourself a reward if you work for just 10 minutes. Often you will find after 10 minutes that you've gotten into the flow of things and are able to keep going.
3) 14 hours a week of work isn't excessive. But it means you need to manage your time better. (See 2)
4) Don't get a tutor unless you are actually struggling with concepts. From what you've said, it just sounds like you have problems with time management rather than the content itself
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