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Title: Introduction for mod A metropolis and 1984 essay
Post by: Nialllovespie on February 11, 2017, 12:28:07 pm
For my first sentence for Metropolis and 1984 essay, should I begin with a more contextual sentence by mentioning how texts are a result of an authors personal contexts, then have my second sentence as more thesis like by having mentioning the suppression of humanity as a result of controlling regimes? Or should I just start with a thesis of what I'm discussing throughout the essay ?

Thanks so much!!

Nia
Title: Re: Introduction for mod A metropolis and 1984 essay
Post by: jamonwindeyer on February 11, 2017, 01:13:50 pm
For my first sentence for Metropolis and 1984 essay, should I begin with a more contextual sentence by mentioning how texts are a result of an authors personal contexts, then have my second sentence as more thesis like by having mentioning the suppression of humanity as a result of controlling regimes? Or should I just start with a thesis of what I'm discussing throughout the essay ?

Thanks so much!!

Nia

Hey Nia! I think the first sentence on contexts shaping representations would work really well; it links to the module and makes your essay more analytical/abstract right off the bat. Nice way to differentiate from an AoS essay ;D
Title: Re: Introduction for mod A metropolis and 1984 essay
Post by: Nialllovespie on February 11, 2017, 01:15:45 pm
Ooooh yay!! Thanks so much for your help!! I really appreciate it! I love how I can just ask questions and have an answer in less than an hour
Title: Re: Introduction for mod A metropolis and 1984 essay
Post by: jamonwindeyer on February 11, 2017, 01:17:30 pm
Ooooh yay!! Thanks so much for your help!! I really appreciate it! I love how I can just ask questions and have an answer in less than an hour

Not a problem! Love helping out ;D