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Title: Medea essay correction
Post by: Gogo14 on July 01, 2017, 09:51:49 pm

hey all. I would appreciate some feedback on my Medea essay, and how I can develop my ideas further. thanks!! (ignore stuff at end of essay)

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Title: Re: Medea essay correction
Post by: clarke54321 on July 02, 2017, 10:26:27 am

Quote from: Gogo14 on July 01, 2017, 09:51:49 pm

hey all. I would appreciate some feedback on my Medea essay, and how I can develop my ideas further. thanks!! (ignore stuff at end of essay)

Mod edit: Edited title.

Hey!

I've had a look through your essay and provided some feedback. Take it with a grain of salt as I too am in year 12.

If you have any questions, please ask.  :)

Title: Re: Medea essay correction
Post by: amigos on July 02, 2017, 01:34:20 pm

Adding on to clarke54321's great advice, try not to collapse the complexity of the play and make it appear two dimensional. This is a common pitfall for responses to a text like this; don't forget that Medea is filled with ambiguities and unresolved tension.

Title: Re: Medea essay correction
Post by: Gogo14 on July 05, 2017, 05:03:16 pm

Thanks! I might try to edit my essay and improve it.