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Title: exam styled response
Post by: spontaneouscombustion on September 25, 2009, 06:30:31 pm



Literature veterans (and current literature students), I really need your help...

It is getting close to the exam, but I still have no idea what I'm supposed to do. Of course, I have a vague idea, but our teacher isn't very good at teaching (IF he even turns up to class...) and he never explained what 'close analysis' was. When we get the passages, what are we supposed to do? I mean, what are we supposed to focus on? Do we develop a thematic discussion or analyse the language used by the author? And what essay structure do you usually use? Also, our teacher never talked about techniques used in poems and novels (eg enjambment, iambic pentameter, tone etc) and when I downloaded assessment reports and read the student examples I was like, 'what the?? We were never taught this!'

If possible, can someone please post up an essay they have written, just so I can have a bit of idea what to do? Please? I really am getting frustrated because of our not-so-good teacher and no one in my class really knows what to do either....

 

Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: simpak on September 29, 2009, 10:56:13 pm
Yes, I feel your pain.
We have the same problem in my class.
I have one or two, but I'm not sure if they will help you considering I'm sketchy on my own technique.
What texts are you doing?
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: spontaneouscombustion on September 30, 2009, 10:04:38 am

For the exam I am doing 'Tenant of Wildfell Hall' and John Donne poetry. We also did 'Honor' and 'Stasiland'. But feel free to please post up essays from any text; I just want to see how others approach the task

Thank you mavisgibbons!
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: Eriny on October 01, 2009, 07:32:46 pm
I have an example in the 'notes' section of this site.

Basically, you come up with something you want to say about the whole book/collection of poetry, based on the three passages you are given. The three passages act as a resource to give you evidence for your argument. Pay close attention to the use of language as well as the content of the story you are given.
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: StringFever on October 04, 2009, 10:01:29 pm
Yes, I feel your pain.
We have the same problem in my class.
I have one or two, but I'm not sure if they will help you considering I'm sketchy on my own technique.
What texts are you doing?

Hey Mavis, just wondering what passages you did your analyses on, because it is a beautifully written response.
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: olivia on October 05, 2009, 06:02:56 pm
hi. I was wondering if anyone was doing Hedda Gabler/ Harwood poetry for the exam. and if anyone knew where i could get sample responses for them? thanks :)
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: iamdan08 on October 06, 2009, 12:42:56 pm
It is really important that you stick to the passages given, if you start straying to much from them, it appears that you are simply rewriting a pre-prepared response, and you will not score well.

Discuss things such as the use of language and the images created by the authors choice of words (especially for poetry). I suggest if you are going to mention literary techniques in your poetry analysis don't say something like "Donne uses iambic pentameter" but rather explain why he has used it and what effect it has on the given extract. Does it force the reader to read at a certain pace to create effect and imagery?

As for structure, read a few of the examples to get an idea and then come up with something that suits you. There is no defined structure and as long as what you are writing makes sense and reads well and your ideas are placed logically, there shouldn't be a problem.

Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: spontaneouscombustion on October 06, 2009, 08:14:43 pm
Thank you Eriny and iamdan08!  :)
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: simpak on October 10, 2009, 01:25:49 am
Yes, I feel your pain.
We have the same problem in my class.
I have one or two, but I'm not sure if they will help you considering I'm sketchy on my own technique.
What texts are you doing?

Hey Mavis, just wondering what passages you did your analyses on, because it is a beautifully written response.

Oh thankyou!  Eeep!  I'll try to remember.
Well, the first one was based on the passages in last year's exam.
And the second...I have no idea.
If I come across the passages in my folder at some point tomorrow, I'll try to let you know.
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: StringFever on October 11, 2009, 10:07:30 pm
Yes, I feel your pain.
We have the same problem in my class.
I have one or two, but I'm not sure if they will help you considering I'm sketchy on my own technique.
What texts are you doing?

Thank you! :)

Hey Mavis, just wondering what passages you did your analyses on, because it is a beautifully written response.

Oh thankyou!  Eeep!  I'll try to remember.
Well, the first one was based on the passages in last year's exam.
And the second...I have no idea.
If I come across the passages in my folder at some point tomorrow, I'll try to let you know.
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: Saraime2003 on October 17, 2009, 03:25:52 pm
My teacher has no idea what she is doing either. Well, i ahve no idea what she is doing. I dont understand Literature and i can't do it. I only did the subject because the teacher said if i was good at English i should try Literature. So i did. And i hate it. I can't do these stupid extracts and im trying to do my final SAC and i can't because the sample she gave us is useless, all over the place. Does anyone have a basic structured approach about what to address?

My SAC is on Chekhov's play, 'Three Sisters'. I'm up to my 3rd Paragraph, trying to talk about Language and Dialogue but i dont have a clue what to write. Please help. :(.

Aimee
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: EvangelionZeta on October 17, 2009, 03:40:13 pm
http://vcenotes.com/forum/index.php/topic,17643.msg180686.html#msg180686

Sample Argued Reading.  (:
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: vexx on October 24, 2009, 04:58:14 pm
slightly off topic..sorry, but i didn't want to make a new thread!!
since with like every other subject there are study guides (checkpoints, A+ notesbook, ect) is there one of these for literature which helps with developing a response required for the exam? (or also guides with the sacs and stuff as well) containing some sort of guide to the structure required & things not to do/ must have?
if anyone could let me know of one, it'd be quite helpful for next year thanks :)

edit; i don't know how i missed checkpoints for lit but i just found it. hehe, regardless, what is the best study guide to use? or is checkpoints the only one ><?
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: Eriny on October 25, 2009, 02:19:56 pm
I think there is a checkpoints for literature and it's not too bad if you can find it.
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: spontaneouscombustion on October 25, 2009, 06:46:44 pm
I found checkpoints to be not much help. It just didn't seem very...relevant.
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: vexx on October 25, 2009, 07:39:12 pm
hmmm, i may buy it anyway, it says it's mostly full of practice questions which i don't know how will help if it's not on our book but..:P
so i'm guessing no one knows of any other study guides? thanks for replies btw
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: olivia on October 26, 2009, 10:07:01 pm
ANY ONE HAVE ANY HEDDA RESPONSES PLEASE? i cant get past a 16 and i really need hel[p and cant find many hedda samples.... PLEASE HELP thanks
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: janie on November 01, 2009, 03:15:58 pm
Hey Fellow Literature students!

I realised that I never should have done Literature! I suck.
I don't understand how to analyse the language.
Also how to structure my paragraphs.

Like I can analyse the passages but I don't know how to from there write a critical essay!

I'm doing Washington Square and This Boys Life! :'(

Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: Trent on November 02, 2009, 11:06:51 am
That does not sound promising 3 days out from the exam.
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: janie on November 03, 2009, 09:15:40 pm
I pray someone sees this before the exam and can help me!!

I totally understand how to analyses the passages and to write a text essay.
I don't know how to put what I have on the passages into an essay format!

If anyone has a good washington square or this boys life exam essay plz plz show me so I know what I'm doing!! :'(
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: EvangelionZeta on November 03, 2009, 09:58:27 pm
Again:

http://vcenotes.com/forum/index.php/topic,17643.msg180686.html#msg180686

Not on either of those two texts, but it shows you how to present your analysis.
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: simpak on November 04, 2009, 10:14:08 am
Pick a thread and roll with it.
Title: Re: exam styled response
Post by: iffets12345 on May 29, 2010, 05:11:36 pm
mavis, did you find it easy to write 1500 words in an hour!