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VCE Stuff => VCE English Studies => VCE Subjects + Help => VCE English Work Submission and Marking => Topic started by: sonnyangel on October 16, 2017, 07:27:55 pm

Title: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
Post by: sonnyangel on October 16, 2017, 07:27:55 pm

Please be as harsh as possible and thank you in advance!! :)

Title: Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
Post by: Cassidyhogi on October 16, 2017, 09:08:46 pm

Hi
I am in yr 12 too so you might wanna wait for further advice. Since you have not received a reply from anyone else yet, here you go.
well done by the way :)

Title: Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
Post by: sonnyangel on October 16, 2017, 09:54:12 pm

Thank you so much!  ;D

Title: Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
Post by: ellellen on October 21, 2017, 08:16:51 pm

hi sonnyangel, random person on atarnotes who i have never met before in real life !

I've gone through your essay, and it's really really solid. All of the things I point out are pretty minor. I hope my feedback is useful!

Well done :)

Title: Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
Post by: sonnyangel on October 22, 2017, 05:39:16 pm

eheheh thanks ellen!!!! your feedback was very very helpful 8)

Title: Re: Insight 2017 Language Analysis - please mark!
Post by: ellellen on October 22, 2017, 05:44:07 pm

I'm glad! And I'm happy to give feedback for any more that you post  ;D