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VCE Stuff => VCE English Studies => VCE Subjects + Help => VCE English Language => Topic started by: peter.g15 on March 24, 2018, 10:37:29 pm

Title: AC Feedback
Post by: peter.g15 on March 24, 2018, 10:37:29 pm

Hi all! Not sure if this is the right place to put this, but I couldn't find anything for ACs in particular, only the essay thread (which i assume is section 3 essays only). I've attached both the article it is based on and then my AC. I wasn't too sure on my expression throughout and especially the end of the 3rd paragraph on coherence and cohesion. Any feedback would be great :)

Title: Re: AC Feedback
Post by: MissSmiley on March 24, 2018, 11:33:44 pm

Quote from: peter.g15 on March 24, 2018, 10:37:29 pm

Hi all! Not sure if this is the right place to put this, but I couldn't find anything for ACs in particular, only the essay thread (which i assume is section 3 essays only). I've attached both the article it is based on and then my AC. I wasn't too sure on my expression throughout and especially the end of the 3rd paragraph on coherence and cohesion. Any feedback would be great :)

Hi Peter!
Attached are some comments on your AC!
Overall, great!! :)
But everything's in my comments within and at the bottom of the document. So won't repeat them here

Thank you! and hope this helps :)

Title: Re: AC Feedback
Post by: peter.g15 on March 24, 2018, 11:59:13 pm

Quote from: MissSmiley on March 24, 2018, 11:33:44 pm

Hi Peter!
Attached are some comments on your AC!
Overall, great!! :)
But everything's in my comments within and at the bottom of the document. So won't repeat them here

Thank you! and hope this helps :)

Thanks so much! I haven't fully read it yet, but it looks like some great stuff :)