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HSC Stuff => HSC Humanities Stuff => HSC Subjects + Help => HSC Legal Studies => Topic started by: impulsebro89 on April 01, 2018, 12:25:38 am

Title: Having trouble including something in essay 🤔
Post by: impulsebro89 on April 01, 2018, 12:25:38 am: Hi everyone!
Just a quick question - in my essay, I want to include a recent maritime deal that was signed between Aus and Indonesia that aims to combat drug trafficking, illegal fishing etc. as an example of cooperation between states in combatting international crime.

However, the problem is that there's no official 'name' for the agreement, so idk how to include it in my essay. Can I just simply say 'a recent agreement between Australia and Indonesia...' or should I include the media article it comes from and say 'according to this article a new agreement..' 🤔🤔

Here's the media article:
https://www.9news.com.au/national/2018/03/16/03/39/indonesia-australia-to-sign-maritime-plan

Thanks!!
Title: Re: Having trouble including something in essay 🤔
Post by: NowYouTseMe on April 01, 2018, 01:44:24 am: https://foreignminister.gov.au/releases/Pages/2018/jb_mr_180316.aspx If this is the same maritime deal, you could refer to it as the Maritime Cooperation Plan of Action.
Title: Re: Having trouble including something in essay 🤔
Post by: impulsebro89 on April 01, 2018, 11:52:22 am: Oh wow thank u so much!! ;D ;D Yup it should be the same deal I think - but now there's a name I can reference hahaha

Thanks once again NowYouTseMe!
Title: Re: Having trouble including something in essay 🤔
Post by: LochNess Monster on April 10, 2018, 06:15:25 pm: Saying that it comes from 9News will also be a good boost to media in LCMIDS!

Tie it in with some statistics maybe to make it even stronger?

Hope you do/did well! :-*
Title: Re: Having trouble including something in essay 🤔
Post by: impulsebro89 on April 12, 2018, 04:59:07 pm: Yup I'll remember that - Hopefully it'll be a bit different from the others who mostly use the same type of cases in their essay :P

Thanks LochNess! I'm waiting for the results to come out now (but they take like 10 years to mark legal) so hopefully all goes well >.<
Title: Re: Having trouble including something in essay 🤔
Post by: elysepopplewell on April 13, 2018, 05:02:45 pm: Quote from: impulsebro89 on April 12, 2018, 04:59:07 pm
Yup I'll remember that - Hopefully it'll be a bit different from the others who mostly use the same type of cases in their essay :P

Thanks LochNess! I'm waiting for the results to come out now (but they take like 10 years to mark legal) so hopefully all goes well >.<

Make sure you let us know how it goes! :)
Title: Re: Having trouble including something in essay 🤔
Post by: impulsebro89 on May 17, 2018, 02:58:54 pm: Oh as it turned out, international crime didn't appear in our half-yearlies so I didn't get to use it haha :'(

Sorry for the late reply btw! I'm not used to clicking on 'show new replies to your post' whenever I go onto AN soz :P
Title: Re: Having trouble including something in essay 🤔
Post by: elysepopplewell on May 18, 2018, 11:39:33 am: Quote from: impulsebro89 on May 17, 2018, 02:58:54 pm
Oh as it turned out, international crime didn't appear in our half-yearlies so I didn't get to use it haha :'(

Sorry for the late reply btw! I'm not used to clicking on 'show new replies to your post' whenever I go onto AN soz :P

haha! I hope you went well nonetheless! Keep this deal up your sleeve for trials and HSC!
Title: Re: Having trouble including something in essay 🤔
Post by: impulsebro89 on May 18, 2018, 11:02:12 pm: Thanks a lot ;D I certainly will!