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HSC Stuff => HSC Subjects + Help => HSC Marking and Feedback => Topic started by: impulsebro89 on October 01, 2018, 12:59:28 pm
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Hi!
I was wondering if anyone could have a look at my Yeats essay and give me feedback plz? Be as brutally honest as you can. Thanks :)
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Hey, I've added some feedback to a google doc version of your file - my comments are in purple
Here's the link!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WnfEmAWXGR-AwUKvkKNsCm1RzaOgABuio_lbE0rf7zw/edit?usp=sharing
I hope my feedback's helpful!
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Thank you so much for your feedback!! Appreciate it ;D (sorry for the late reply!)
I see you're doing the HSC this year too - Good luck for your upcoming exams :)
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Also in regards to your feedback:
The reason why I don't really 'answer' the question at the end of my paragraphs is because my teacher always told me I tend to become too repetitive if I answer the q. at the end of every para, so that's why I really didn't do that. Do you think it'll be better if I did? (to maximise those marks!)
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Thank you so much for your feedback!! Appreciate it ;D (sorry for the late reply!)
I see you're doing the HSC this year too - Good luck for your upcoming exams :)
Hey no problem! Good luck to you as well! Here's to never having to read Yeats ever again after Friday!
Also in regards to your feedback:
The reason why I don't really 'answer' the question at the end of my paragraphs is because my teacher always told me I tend to become too repetitive if I answer the q. at the end of every para, so that's why I really didn't do that. Do you think it'll be better if I did? (to maximise those marks!)
It is definitely better to link at the end of each paragraph, even if it's repetitive. Remember this is timed exam conditions, so markers will be a bit lenient - a 20/20 doesn't neccesarily mean a perfect essay, just an outstanding essay, particularly given the situation.
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Here's to never having to do English ever again! 8)