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Title: Need help with HR short answers :)
Post by: marstac on May 09, 2019, 10:44:05 pm

Hey!

I just practised a few small short answer questions for human rights and wanted to know if I could get some feedback and a mark for each?

Thanks heaps! :)

Title: Re: Need help with HR short answers :)
Post by: jamonwindeyer on May 09, 2019, 11:22:09 pm

Hey! I had a bit of a read and jotted down some comments, hope they are helpful! ;D

Title: Re: Need help with HR short answers :)
Post by: marstac on May 10, 2019, 07:37:08 am

Thank you! I will apply these changes and do some more responses tonight! :)

Title: Re: Need help with HR short answers :)
Post by: marstac on May 10, 2019, 09:10:01 am

Is there a guide or rule as to the amount of cases, examples etc to use depending on the amount of marks the question is worth?

Thank you  :)

Title: Re: Need help with HR short answers :)
Post by: fantasticbeasts3 on May 10, 2019, 10:39:01 am

Quote from: marstac on May 10, 2019, 09:10:01 am

Is there a guide or rule as to the amount of cases, examples etc to use depending on the amount of marks the question is worth?

Thank you  :)

Not really! Chuck in examples whenever you’re making a statement because you need to back it up with evidence. E.g. straight-out saying that Australia protects human rights isn’t enough — you’ll need to give an example as to how human rights are being protected.

Hope this helps!