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Title: Human Rights short answer
Post by: marstac on May 13, 2019, 09:46:06 am

Hi guys,

Any feedback on my short responses would be very much appreciated!! A mark for the answers too pleasssseeee  :) :) :) :)

Thanks heaps :) :) :) :)

Title: Re: Human Rights short answer
Post by: Pearlmilktea on May 23, 2019, 07:25:40 pm

Wow you’ve done an awesome job here! Your amount of evidence is insanely good – you seem super passionate about the subject!
I’ve just edited certain things with expression and added suggestions for further points or evidence. Only minor things though – great job!

Sorry I didn't tell you how many marks you got. I'm in the library without my legal worksheets and am doing this from my HR knowledge from last term :D

Here is a website I just found that seems to have some great contemporary legislation for slavery.
http://www.antislavery.org.au/resources/legal-resources/key-australian-legislation/39-the-commonwealth-criminal-code.html
I think it'd be worth looking at for your responses :D

Please tell me if you have any Qs! Great job :)

Gracie

P.S. Sorry the formatting on the document stuffed up!