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Title: Peace Essay Structure!
Post by: Partinus on May 20, 2019, 08:53:18 pm
Hey guys,

I desperately need help structuring my peace essay. Here's the question:
"Assess how the principal teachings of TWO religious traditions contribute to the achievement of world peace."

I'm not sure whether to do it based on principal teachings or inner peace --> world peace. I was thinking a combination of the two:
P1: (Christianity) PT: Divine Peace of God & Inner Peace

P2: (Islam) PT: Allah is Peace & Inner Peace

P3: (Christianity) PT: Peace in Relationships & World Peace

P4: (Islam) PT: Justice & World Peace

What do you think? I've mainly been focusing on principal teachings so I'm not really sure how to integrate inner and world peace at the moment. Any help would be greatly appreciated.  :)