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QCE Stuff => QCE Subjects + Help => QCE Marking and Feedback => Topic started by: Cimsy on February 27, 2020, 08:06:33 am
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Hey, I'd really appreciate any feedback on my work. Especially anything to reduce the word count.
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Hey,
Welcome to the forums :)
I've gone through and commented on anything that stood out + marked some places where you could rephrase your work to be more clear and/or succinct.
Marine ecology is an area I'm really interested in so I had to make sure not to try and phrase my comments in a way friendly to people without that background (e.g. the impact of carrying capacity on population growth) but if there's anything unclear please feel free to let me know.
Note: I haven't gone through and directly compared what you've written to the marking guidelines QCAA has published, only focused on what stood out + on the word count aspects. If you haven't already I recommend you look at the sample assessments and all of the assessment information. You can find that here
Please feel free to ask any follow up questions you have and good luck :)
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Thank you so much!