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HSC Stuff => HSC Subjects + Help => HSC Marking and Feedback => Topic started by: izzymartiin on March 29, 2020, 02:24:16 pm

Title: Help with modifying English Narrative piece
Post by: izzymartiin on March 29, 2020, 02:24:16 pm

Hey guys! I was in need of some help on ways to improve my narrative and would really appreciate if someone could provide me with some constructive criticism and show me where abouts it needs fixing :) Thank you!!