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HSC Stuff => HSC Subjects + Help => HSC Marking and Feedback => Topic started by: mani.s_ on April 01, 2020, 04:36:56 pm

Title: Could I please get some essay feedback??? Thank you :)
Post by: mani.s_ on April 01, 2020, 04:36:56 pm

Hi, I was wondering If I could get feedback on my essay on Henry Lawson's short stories.

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank you!

Title: Re: Could I please get some essay feedback??? Thank you :)
Post by: MoanaAbadael on April 01, 2020, 05:54:29 pm

Is this for a Multimodal presentation?? if so then your introduction is a dat bit long.

Title: Re: Could I please get some essay feedback??? Thank you :)
Post by: mani.s_ on April 01, 2020, 06:05:13 pm

Quote from: MoanaAbadael  on April 01, 2020, 05:54:29 pm

Is this for a Multimodal presentation?? if so then your introduction is a dat bit long.

no this is just a essay, not for a multimodal