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Title: Discursive Writing Feedback
Post by: NavyNav on May 30, 2020, 08:41:08 pm
Hey guys

I wrote this draft response for the question

Falstaff has been labelled as one of "nature's predators"
Write an extended response in which you challenge or affirm this view regarding Falstaff in Shakespeare’s King Henry IV, Part 1.

I've never been quite sure or confident about discursive responses so could someone please take some precious time out of their day to read through my response and tell me whether I've written a quality discursive essay or whether I've gone completely off the rails.