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Title: Biology Research Investigation
Post by: jewel_14 on August 02, 2020, 04:47:37 pm

Hi,

I was wondering if anyone could please provide me with feedback.


Thanks

Title: Re: Biology Research Investigation
Post by: Bri MT on August 02, 2020, 09:17:03 pm

Hey,

It looks like a significant difficulty you've faced in this is that you already knew what your conclusion would be (and for good reason) which made it harder for you to show the steps to provide reasoning and evidence for this. I've given more detailed feedback on the attached document - I hope it helps & as always please feel free to reply with follow up questions & comments :)

Title: Re: Biology Research Investigation
Post by: jewel_14 on August 17, 2020, 06:18:13 pm

Hi Bri,

Thank you for your feedback. I have attached an updated version onto this post, would you be able to have a look at it and let me know as to what I could improve on.

Thank you.

Title: Re: Biology Research Investigation
Post by: Bri MT on August 17, 2020, 08:27:42 pm

Hi!

I can see the improvements!

I've quickly annotated the document with comments, where I just have "." as the comment it means I've commented on this before, so you should check previous annotations.

I hope this helps :)