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QCE Stuff => QCE Subjects + Help => QCE Marking and Feedback => Topic started by: Jazmin Ward on February 21, 2021, 08:56:36 pm
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Hi,
I was just wondering if anyone could give me any feedback on my English comparative online literary article. We had to write an online literary article for a well-read audience comparing and contrasting the nature of 'the Dream’ in both The Great Gatsby and The Castle. I think that I mostly need to work on expression and adding in more subtle references to aesthetic features and stylistic devices used in the texts. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks! :)
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Hi,
I was just wondering if anyone could give me any feedback on my English comparative online literary article. We had to write an online literary article for a well-read audience comparing and contrasting the nature of 'the Dream’ in both The Great Gatsby and The Castle. I think that I mostly need to work on expression and adding in more subtle references to aesthetic features and stylistic devices used in the texts. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks! :)
Hey Jazmin,
I would be more than happy to write some feedback for you! I’ll send the version with feedback via email as soon as it’s finished or if it’s easier I can just reply to this thread with the attachment - whichever option you prefer.
Have a great week and kind regards,
Darcy Dillon.
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Thank you Darcy that would be awesome. My email is [email protected]
I hope you have a great week as well!
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Hi Darcy,
If it's not too much trouble would you be able to attach the feedback to this thread once it is finished, as my email is playing up at the moment? Thank you!
Kind regards,
Jazmin Ward