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Title: English Oral Speech
Post by: nexwapp on April 05, 2016, 10:20:23 pm
How do you properly structure an oral speech? I am struggling a lot with this and cannot start my speech.  :(
Title: Re: English Oral Speech
Post by: JG97 on April 06, 2016, 12:09:19 pm
Hey nexwapp,
My top tip is to start with a hook. A hook can be a question to engage the audience, or a surprising statement. My Year 12 oral was on vaccination, so my question was: Have any of you had experiences of whooping cough, polio and diptheria? The answer was mostly negative, as they had all been vaccinated against them, therefore the diseases weren't around much here anymore. Then you can lead into your first point.
Hope this helps.
-Jonathan
Title: Re: English Oral Speech
Post by: FallingStar on April 06, 2016, 08:27:16 pm
Here's a suggested structure of the speech.

1. As JG97 has said, you start with a hook. This can be something interesting, that engages the audience. It apart from what JG97 said, it could also be a story/scenario. I did mine on American gun laws, and I started with this:

"Imagine that insert what you'll normally do in English classes. Suddenly, you hear the lockdown alarm. There is a shooter rampaging at school.

Scary right."

2. State your contention. This was mine:

"Clearly, America needs to control their gun owners. They need stronger gun laws."

3. Your arguments.
And so forth

4. Rebuttals (if any)

5. Conclusion. Make it interesting. Don't just repeat the contention. Conclude the speech with an interesting question or statement.
Mine was:

"It is so fortunate that after the 1996 massacre, that we, as Australians said no more to mass shootings. Don't you think America should do the same?"
Title: Re: English Oral Speech
Post by: nexwapp on April 06, 2016, 08:51:29 pm
These both help a lot, thank you!  :)
Title: Re: English Oral Speech
Post by: Cornrow Kenny on April 06, 2016, 09:22:04 pm
An important note would be that you shouldn't structure it like an essay.

You should try have certain arguments per "body" paragraph etc, but it should be understandable, persuasive, and flow nicely.