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VCE Stuff => VCE English Studies => VCE Subjects + Help => VCE English & EAL => Topic started by: Cassidyhogi on October 16, 2017, 05:36:49 pm

Title: Essay Pls mark :)
Post by: Cassidyhogi on October 16, 2017, 05:36:49 pm

This is an "Argument Analysis" essay from Lauren's exam (2015 Exam 1 Section C)

Eternally grateful in advance ;)

Title: Re: Essay Pls mark :)
Post by: LifeisaConstantStruggle on October 16, 2017, 06:19:21 pm

sure will be done in a bit

Title: Re: Essay Pls mark :)
Post by: LifeisaConstantStruggle on October 16, 2017, 06:37:20 pm

hello

Title: Re: Essay Pls mark :)
Post by: Cassidyhogi on October 16, 2017, 07:18:58 pm

Thank you!
Yeah I always forget to mention tone and the visual. So i end up not mentioning both or sliding in a sentence or two towards the end.
In the study design for English it says to "critique ideas presented in arguments" so that is why I concluded my essay the way I did...

Thank you so much!

Title: Re: Essay Pls mark :)
Post by: LifeisaConstantStruggle on October 16, 2017, 10:06:22 pm

Considering critique (from Google) means:
1) a detailed analysis and assessment of something, especially a literary, philosophical or political theory.
2) evaluate (a theory or a practice) in a detailed and analytical way.
I think it's best to stay neutral on analysing argument, as critique doesn't carry the same meaning as criticism.

Title: Re: Essay Pls mark :)
Post by: Cassidyhogi on October 16, 2017, 10:09:23 pm

Oh okay then. Thanks for this, really appreciate it ;D