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HSC Stuff => HSC Humanities Stuff => HSC Subjects + Help => HSC Economics => Topic started by: dancingpenguin123 on November 28, 2018, 10:00:44 pm

Title: Economics Mexican Case Study Feedback
Post by: dancingpenguin123 on November 28, 2018, 10:00:44 pm
I'm doing a case study for mexico and I have written way too much and I don't know where to cut down without hurting my marks. Could someone please possibly have a look at this essay and possibly see where i could cut down and also see what I'm missing? I have the notification attached for clarification. Also, would I be on the right track?