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1984 essay (part 2)

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choc_bananas:
any feedback? please!

 :D

ninwa:
I skimmed through it quite quickly so theres probably many things I missed (though of course the examiners will also skim through)

 - don't use abbreviations; instead of "i.e." use something like "that is,"

 - really good sophisticated language BUT ... sometimes I feel it takes away from the clarity of what you're trying to say. Keep it simple and concise! Sometimes I got a little lost as to what you were trying to say.

 - I would've liked to see you resist the topic a bit more. Examiners love it when you can also present a view as to why the contention in the question is inaccurate

Overall ... I think its definitely at least 8/10

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