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hamlet essay

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Sheikh05:
This is Mustafa btw  :P

I felt that you had a firm grasp of the topic, but and this is a big but, you did not really delve into the essence of hamlet's procrastination. you mentioned he wanted to be a gentleman. I think hamlet was more religious than a gentleman. To satiate his appetite for revenge Hamlet would have to commit regicide which was particularly abhorrent in Elizabethan England (remember Macbeth?).

I could continue to say what I would have done but that won't achieve anything. I feel that you didn't link back to the topic enough. You did address it, but there wasn't that 'oomph' to capitalize on your discussions in addressing the topic. Basically, you didn't argue enough.

I'd give it a 7/10

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