Hey everyone,
Just looking for some help in regards to the context essay (Section B). I have chosen to refer to the ideas in 'The Crucible' for the topic of 'Encountering Conflict.' I've decided to do a speech, which is a bit of a hybrid in some senses, yet I sometimes have trouble finding key events in the play to refer to. My speech is modeled around the recent wave of uprisings throughout the Middle East and Africa, and is essentially a speech to the people in regards to oppression. I often mould some quotes to fit my scenario, but generally I refer to Proctor's 'It is my name,' as well as the evident divisions within the community, as a result of an oppressive theocratic system.
I've mixed up my speeches a little more now, as they were beginning to sound repetitive and regurgitated, however I still need to find a few more suitable references to the play that I could incorporate effectively into my writing. I'm aware that I shouldn't refer to characters by their name in most cases, as the audience I am preaching to would have no idea who these people are. However, I do make references to 17th century Salem and draw comparisons between my scenario and the ideas of the Crucible.
Perhaps what I really need to work on is making it obvious that I am drawing on the ideas of The Crucible, as well as answering the prompt directly. Also, I tend to go from one thing to another, instead of including a clear cut comparison within the one sentence.
Any assistance in regards to key themes/ideas in the Crucible and how they relate to my scenario would be greatly appreciated. How can I make it blatantly obvious to the assessor that I am referring to the play and answering the prompt directly, without the use of the book title or characters.
Good luck for all your exams!
