Mark my work?

[Surgeon]

Hey guys,

I was just wondering whether anybody would be willing to mark my context piece and perhaps give me any tips as to how I can make it better. I should probably get an english tutor to do this for me haha.

Please private message me your email address so I can email it to you.

I would prefer someone who has already graduated to mark it/take a look at it for me simply because I don't think someone that hasn't finished English 3/4 yet could do a very good job of marking it. If you're very good at English and feel as though you could give me some constructive criticism even though you haven't finished english yet, please feel free to also private message me your email address.

Many thanks in advance

[Truck]

English work submission and marking