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Daniyahasan:
Hey guys!
So iv attached by Mod C Billy Elliot essay below
in trails it was my weakest essay scoring a 12/20:(
but iv fixed it up tremendously now but i still feel like its not good enough
one thing im worried about is the length, its WAYY too long, so itd be great if you guys tell me what bits that are unnecessary , cos i HAVE to get rid of some stuff but im not sure what
and can you guys please allocate what mark id be looking at with this essay out of 20?
Thank you, you guys are the real MVP:)
jamonwindeyer:
--- Quote from: Daniyahasan on September 26, 2017, 10:18:36 am ---Hey guys!
So iv attached by Mod C Billy Elliot essay below
in trails it was my weakest essay scoring a 12/20:(
but iv fixed it up tremendously now but i still feel like its not good enough
one thing im worried about is the length, its WAYY too long, so itd be great if you guys tell me what bits that are unnecessary , cos i HAVE to get rid of some stuff but im not sure what
and can you guys please allocate what mark id be looking at with this essay out of 20?
Thank you, you guys are the real MVP:)
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Hey! My spreadsheet says you need 125 posts to receive feedback on your next essay (having had three things marked before now) - Note that the post count requirement has temporarily increased to 50 posts to help us manage the HSC rush :)
Daniyahasan:
--- Quote from: jamonwindeyer on September 26, 2017, 01:11:46 pm ---Hey! My spreadsheet says you need 125 posts to receive feedback on your next essay (having had three things marked before now) - Note that the post count requirement has temporarily increased to 50 posts to help us manage the HSC rush :)
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OMG since when, ddnt see any post saying the requirement had increased so i didnt know ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
so did you mean i need 125 for this essay or for the next one?
Daniyahasan:
Hey!
finally mustered up 125 posts so hopefully i can get feedback on my essay now
So iv attached my Mod C Billy Elliot essay below
in trails it was my weakest essay scoring a 12/20 :(
but iv fixed it up tremendously now but i still feel like its not good enough
one thing im seriously worried about is the length, its WAYY too long, so itd be great if you guys tell me what bits are unnecessary , cos i HAVE to get rid of some stuff because theres no way i can write all that in 40 minutes, but im not sure what to get rid of
and can you guys please allocate what mark id be looking at with this essay out of 20?
Thanks!!!!
Daniyahasan:
Hey Jamon,
so i have an mock hsc exam for modules on Tuesday and i already put up my mod c essays a couple of days ago, but if i put my mod b essay tonight is there any way i can get them both back before Sunday?
ik you guys probs have HEAPS of other essays and things to mark but but i reallyyyy wanna do well in those mock exams im SO sorry this is so late minute-ish
Thanks :)
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