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English Extension 1 Essay Marking
Lauradf36:
--- Quote from: elysepopplewell on August 03, 2016, 11:46:55 am ---Hello! I'll jump to this now :)
In the spoiler is your essay, with my own comments throughout. But I tend to stop writing comments towards the end if there is a recurring suggestion, in which case I'll write it below the spoiler :)
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Thanks so much for your feedback! It's always great to have a new perspective and fresh eyes, so I will definitely try and implement your advice. This gives me a bit more confidence going into trials! :)
elysepopplewell:
--- Quote from: Lauradf36 on August 03, 2016, 04:59:00 pm ---Thanks so much for your feedback! It's always great to have a new perspective and fresh eyes, so I will definitely try and implement your advice. This gives me a bit more confidence going into trials! :)
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I'm so glad! Hopefully if you gain anything from the creative feedback on the other forum, it is confidence for trials! But you are such a skilled writer, your expression is so clear. It's a real skill you have, even apparently in exam conditions! :)
Lauradf36:
--- Quote from: elysepopplewell on August 03, 2016, 05:41:26 pm ---I'm so glad! Hopefully if you gain anything from the creative feedback on the other forum, it is confidence for trials! But you are such a skilled writer, your expression is so clear. It's a real skill you have, even apparently in exam conditions! :)
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Well, to be honest, I had my quotes & ideas & "bomb.com lines" as my teacher says for my paragraphs already written out. So not completely spur of the moment. And typing is different to handwriting of course! Let's just hope I can replicate it on the day!
elysepopplewell:
--- Quote from: Lauradf36 on August 04, 2016, 04:58:40 pm ---Well, to be honest, I had my quotes & ideas & "bomb.com lines" as my teacher says for my paragraphs already written out. So not completely spur of the moment. And typing is different to handwriting of course! Let's just hope I can replicate it on the day!
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That's always a good idea, for any essay! I'm sure you'll do wonderfully, especially if this is anything to go by!
jamonwindeyer:
Hi everyone! So exams are right around the corner, and unsurprisingly, there are a HEAP of people wanting feedback on essays. Given that demand is really high, it is only natural that we will need to increase the post requirement for the coming days, to make sure that our feedback remains of the highest possible quality. Thus, for all essays posted between now (this post) and this time next week, you will need 30 posts for every essay you would like marked. Note that this does not apply to essays before this point, meaning no one is in post debt. It just means that essays 'cost more' for the next week. We appreciate your understanding :)
Note: We will be very harsh on our posting rules over the coming days. Posting in old threads, multi-posting, shit-posting and spamming (etc) to access essay marking won't work. Immediate 48 hour posting bans will be applied in all circumstances :)
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