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« Reply #750 on: November 16, 2017, 08:00:45 pm »
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Hey do you have any idea why the speech by Paul Keating in 1992 was controversial?

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Hey! I'd say it is just because it was recognising previous faults of "white" Australia. Lines like this:

Recognition that it was we who did the dispossessing

That's a big statement to make in the 90's right when the land rights movement was at its peak. It was one of the first speeches to push towards the reconciliation era of indigenous relations, and it would have made a lot of people mad (heck, the sorry speech in 2007 ruffled a lot of feathers) :)

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« Reply #751 on: November 16, 2017, 08:57:32 pm »
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Hey! I'd say it is just because it was recognising previous faults of "white" Australia. Lines like this:

Recognition that it was we who did the dispossessing

That's a big statement to make in the 90's right when the land rights movement was at its peak. It was one of the first speeches to push towards the reconciliation era of indigenous relations, and it would have made a lot of people mad (heck, the sorry speech in 2007 ruffled a lot of feathers) :)

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« Reply #752 on: November 17, 2017, 01:09:37 pm »
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Hey Guys , so i've finally finished my HSC journey and thought I would lend a helping hand . To give you a bit of background I studied studies of Religion 2 unit .
For my depth studies I studied
Christianity: Bioethics , Paul of Tarsus ,Baptism
Judaism : Bioethics, Abraham Geiger , synagogue service
Islam : environmental ethics , Aisha Bint Abu Bakr , Hajj
and for religion and peace i covered : Christianity and Islam
I really enjoyed SOR 2 and scored 90-95% for all my school exams and would like to help as much as possible. I am aware that both Elyse and Jamon have a lot on their plate so I am more than happy to return the favour
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« Reply #753 on: November 20, 2017, 03:35:47 pm »
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Hey Guys , so i've finally finished my HSC journey and thought I would lend a helping hand . To give you a bit of background I studied studies of Religion 2 unit .
For my depth studies I studied
Christianity: Bioethics , Paul of Tarsus ,Baptism
Judaism : Bioethics, Abraham Geiger , synagogue service
Islam : environmental ethics , Aisha Bint Abu Bakr , Hajj
and for religion and peace i covered : Christianity and Islam
I really enjoyed SOR 2 and scored 90-95% for all my school exams and would like to help as much as possible. I am aware that both Elyse and Jamon have a lot on their plate so I am more than happy to return the favour
All the best.

Hey Mary! So stoked to hear you'll be hanging around to see if you can offer a hand. If you have any digital notes, you can upload them for students to find as well. We appreciate you hoping to help incoming students - that's what ATAR Notes is all about. You're awesome :)
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« Reply #754 on: November 20, 2017, 09:39:10 pm »
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Hey this is my assignment for SOR2 due Friday so if anyone could give some feedback by Thursday it would be much appreciated.

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« Reply #755 on: November 20, 2017, 09:58:06 pm »
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Hey Mary! So stoked to hear you'll be hanging around to see if you can offer a hand. If you have any digital notes, you can upload them for students to find as well. We appreciate you hoping to help incoming students - that's what ATAR Notes is all about. You're awesome :)
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« Reply #756 on: November 20, 2017, 10:41:10 pm »
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Hey this is my assignment for SOR2 due Friday so if anyone could give some feedback by Thursday it would be much appreciated.

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Hey so  I will try get this done by tomorrow if someone hasnt already done this ,all the best!
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« Reply #757 on: November 21, 2017, 06:52:36 pm »
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Hey so  I will try get this done by tomorrow if someone hasnt already done this ,all the best!

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« Reply #758 on: November 22, 2017, 04:06:00 pm »
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Hey all done my comments are left in blue all the best , if you have any questions leave them down below !
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« Reply #759 on: November 22, 2017, 05:25:28 pm »
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Hey all done my comments are left in blue all the best , if you have any questions leave them down below !

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« Reply #760 on: November 22, 2017, 06:08:01 pm »
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Thank you, you are a legend
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« Reply #761 on: December 10, 2017, 07:03:19 pm »
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Hi, I've just completed an essay on Judaism. I would really appreciate some feedback

“Religious traditions change over time,
often due to the influence of specific
individuals or schools of thought. These
individuals or ideas may offer new
interpretations and redirect the future
path of the religion.”

Analyse the above statement, referring to
a significant person or school of thought
for a religious tradition.

My Answer

Religious traditions are consequently changed over time by significant people. These significant individuals do not necessarily change their respective religions, but they offer new interpretations and open the future path for their religion. Born in Cordoba Spain in 1135, Moses Maimonides was an extremely influential Jewish philosopher and Rabbi who offered new interpretations of the Jewish beliefs and sacred texts and redirected the path of Judaism and its adherents during the time where Judaism was vulnerable to the threats from the Almohads and classical philosophy. Maimonides did this through his role as chief Rabbi of Cairo and his literary works: the Mishnah Torah, the Commentary on the Mishnah, the Guide to the perplexed and the Book of Commandments. Maimonides’ texts helped strengthen Judaism by making it accessible to all Jewish adherents and by providing new interpretations on the Jewish faith.
 
Maimonides offered new interpretations of the Jewish laws and ethical guidelines through his Mishnah Torah where he provided a simple systematic version of the Talmud in which all Jewish adherents would be able to interpret. Through the Mishnah Torah, Maimonides offered new interpretations of the Torah and the Talmud as he made them more accessible to everyday Jews as well as scholars. In the text, Maimonides revealed that: “A person who first reads the written Torah and then this work will know it from the whole of the Oral Torah” The Mishnah Torah consolidated Jewish adherents who were living in a society dominated by Islam by redirecting them to Judaism, thus preventing them from converting to Islam. In the 21st century, Jewish adherents who don’t have the time to read the Talmud can still acquire knowledge concerning Jewish beliefs and laws in the Mishnah Torah, this shows the impact of Maimonides interpretation of Judaism as without it, Jewish adherents wouldn’t be able to understand the Jewish laws and beliefs, therefore Judaism may not even have existed. Furthermore, the impact of the Mishnah Torah being accessible to all Jewish adherents is revealed by Rabbi Shlomo Moshe Amar (Chief Rabbi of Israel and Rishon Lezion): “They added many indexes… so that it can be accessible to any person at any time, be he simple or wise”. Maimonides’ Mishnah Torah offers new interpretations on Judaism and redirected the future of Judaism.
 
Maimonides’ Guide to the Perplexed(Moreh Nevuchim) was an innovative philosophical piece of writing which introduced the interpretation that science and religion could co-exist. Through this text, Maimonides strengthened Judaism against the threats of Aristotelian philosophy. By strengthening Judaism, Maimonides directed the future path of Judaism, this is because without his interpretation the Aristotelian philosophy would have undermined the Jewish faith and Judaism may have dissipated. However, the Guide to the Perplexed was subject to controversy within the Jewish and Gentile communities. For instance, various scholars pointed out the contradictions between God’s commandments and the depictions of God. However, Maimonides responded to this criticism by concluding that the bible should not be taken literally. In addition, the Guide to the perplexed revealed that “Truth does not become more true by virtue of the fact that the entire world agrees with it, nor less so even if the whole world disagrees with it”, showing that the fact that science and religion could co-exist is the truth and will remain the truth even if everyone agrees or disagrees with it. Furthermore, the Guide to the Perplexed was further subjected to criticism and controversy as some believed that Maimonides intentionally undermining Judaism by emphasising on rational thought as he concluded that the bible should not be taken literally. By creating a relationship between science and Judaism, Maimonides redirected Judaism during a time of separation between Sephardic and Ashkenazic Jews.
Through his Commentary on the Mishnah(Perush Ha-MIshnayot), Maimonides offered new interpretations on Judaism and redirected the path of Judaism as he made the Talmud clear, concise and accessible so that it could be understood by all Jewish adherents; past and present.  The Commentary on the Mishnah, collected all the binding laws from the Talmud and explained the meaning behind each Mitzvot. This work also included the 13 principles of faith, which provided Jewish adherents with simple statements regarding Jewish beliefs. At first, the 13 principles of faith attracted widespread controversy, however over time they formed the basis of numerous Jewish credal statements and were added to modern editions of the Talmud, thus showing Maimonides’ redirection of the future of Judaism. Therefore, through his Commentary on the Mishnah and the 13 principles of faith, Maimonides offered new interpretations concerning Jewish faith and redirected the future of Judaism as he highlighted the Jewish beliefs in a universal context so that its relevance would carry on through time.
 
In his Book of Commandments (Sefer-Ha-MItzvot), Maimonides listed and defined the 613 mitzvot into a simple and clear context. Maimonides divided the mitzvot into positive and negative, this helped Jewish adherents to understand how to live their lives in a morally correct way and how to maintain a good relationship with God. Through his interpretation of the 613 mitzvot, Maimonides redirected the future of Judaism by keeping the Jewish faith strong amongst the Jewish communities whilst facing threats from the Almohads. Therefore, through his interpretation of the mitzvot, Maimonides was able to redirect the future of Judaism by transforming it into a dynamic religion, this is seen today as Judaism still exists in the 21st century and the 613 mitzvot are still applicable to modern society.
 
Besides his literary works, Maimonides offered new interpretations of Judaism after he became the chief Rabbi of Cairo in 1171. During his time as chief Rabbi, Maimonides dealt with matters ranging from matters that concerned Jewish law to matters that concerned general civil issues. For instance, Jewish adherents (including all members from all social classes) would write to Maimonides for advice on how to maintain their Jewish faith in their communities, Maimonides wrote responses (teshuvot) back to them. Maimonides’ responses helped keep Judaism strong during the Almohad invasion, which redirected the future of Judaism by preventing the religion from dissipating. Maimonides’ momentous contribution as the chief Rabbi of Cairo was acknowledged by the time magazine in 1985: “Maimonides is the most influential Jewish thinker of the Middle Ages, and quite possible of all time” Therefore, during his time as the Chief Rabbi of Cairo, Maimonides was able to offer new interpretations of Judaism through his responses to the queries of Jewish adherents from a range of different communities.

Maimonides literary works and the work he had done as chief Rabbi of Egypt provided new interpretations of the Jewish faith and redirected the path of Judaism by helping it to remain existent throughout different time periods. Consequently, without Maimonides’ literary works and responses (when he was the chief Rabbi) Judaism would not be the dynamic religion that it is in the 21st century. Through his restructuring and analysation of the integral Jewish texts, Maimonides consolidated the wider Jewish community during times of threats from the Almohads and Aristotelian philosophy. The impact of Maimonides’ work is reflected through the saying: “From moshe to moshe, there arose none like moshe”.  Maimonides impact on Judaism is still relevant today, as his interpretations of the Jewish faith have been concretised and many Jewish adherents continue to follow his guidance.

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« Reply #762 on: December 10, 2017, 11:14:29 pm »
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Hi, I've just completed an essay on Judaism. I would really appreciate some feedback

“Religious traditions change over time,
often due to the influence of specific
individuals or schools of thought. These
individuals or ideas may offer new
interpretations and redirect the future
path of the religion.”

Analyse the above statement, referring to
a significant person or school of thought
for a religious tradition.

My Answer

Religious traditions are consequently changed over time by significant people. These significant individuals do not necessarily change their respective religions, but they offer new interpretations and open the future path for their religion. Born in Cordoba Spain in 1135, Moses Maimonides was an extremely influential Jewish philosopher and Rabbi who offered new interpretations of the Jewish beliefs and sacred texts and redirected the path of Judaism and its adherents during the time where Judaism was vulnerable to the threats from the Almohads and classical philosophy. Maimonides did this through his role as chief Rabbi of Cairo and his literary works: the Mishnah Torah, the Commentary on the Mishnah, the Guide to the perplexed and the Book of Commandments. Maimonides’ texts helped strengthen Judaism by making it accessible to all Jewish adherents and by providing new interpretations on the Jewish faith.
 
Maimonides offered new interpretations of the Jewish laws and ethical guidelines through his Mishnah Torah where he provided a simple systematic version of the Talmud in which all Jewish adherents would be able to interpret. Through the Mishnah Torah, Maimonides offered new interpretations of the Torah and the Talmud as he made them more accessible to everyday Jews as well as scholars. In the text, Maimonides revealed that: “A person who first reads the written Torah and then this work will know it from the whole of the Oral Torah” The Mishnah Torah consolidated Jewish adherents who were living in a society dominated by Islam by redirecting them to Judaism, thus preventing them from converting to Islam. In the 21st century, Jewish adherents who don’t have the time to read the Talmud can still acquire knowledge concerning Jewish beliefs and laws in the Mishnah Torah, this shows the impact of Maimonides interpretation of Judaism as without it, Jewish adherents wouldn’t be able to understand the Jewish laws and beliefs, therefore Judaism may not even have existed. Furthermore, the impact of the Mishnah Torah being accessible to all Jewish adherents is revealed by Rabbi Shlomo Moshe Amar (Chief Rabbi of Israel and Rishon Lezion): “They added many indexes… so that it can be accessible to any person at any time, be he simple or wise”. Maimonides’ Mishnah Torah offers new interpretations on Judaism and redirected the future of Judaism.
 
Maimonides’ Guide to the Perplexed(Moreh Nevuchim) was an innovative philosophical piece of writing which introduced the interpretation that science and religion could co-exist. Through this text, Maimonides strengthened Judaism against the threats of Aristotelian philosophy. By strengthening Judaism, Maimonides directed the future path of Judaism, this is because without his interpretation the Aristotelian philosophy would have undermined the Jewish faith and Judaism may have dissipated. However, the Guide to the Perplexed was subject to controversy within the Jewish and Gentile communities. For instance, various scholars pointed out the contradictions between God’s commandments and the depictions of God. However, Maimonides responded to this criticism by concluding that the bible should not be taken literally. In addition, the Guide to the perplexed revealed that “Truth does not become more true by virtue of the fact that the entire world agrees with it, nor less so even if the whole world disagrees with it”, showing that the fact that science and religion could co-exist is the truth and will remain the truth even if everyone agrees or disagrees with it. Furthermore, the Guide to the Perplexed was further subjected to criticism and controversy as some believed that Maimonides intentionally undermining Judaism by emphasising on rational thought as he concluded that the bible should not be taken literally. By creating a relationship between science and Judaism, Maimonides redirected Judaism during a time of separation between Sephardic and Ashkenazic Jews.
Through his Commentary on the Mishnah(Perush Ha-MIshnayot), Maimonides offered new interpretations on Judaism and redirected the path of Judaism as he made the Talmud clear, concise and accessible so that it could be understood by all Jewish adherents; past and present.  The Commentary on the Mishnah, collected all the binding laws from the Talmud and explained the meaning behind each Mitzvot. This work also included the 13 principles of faith, which provided Jewish adherents with simple statements regarding Jewish beliefs. At first, the 13 principles of faith attracted widespread controversy, however over time they formed the basis of numerous Jewish credal statements and were added to modern editions of the Talmud, thus showing Maimonides’ redirection of the future of Judaism. Therefore, through his Commentary on the Mishnah and the 13 principles of faith, Maimonides offered new interpretations concerning Jewish faith and redirected the future of Judaism as he highlighted the Jewish beliefs in a universal context so that its relevance would carry on through time.
 
In his Book of Commandments (Sefer-Ha-MItzvot), Maimonides listed and defined the 613 mitzvot into a simple and clear context. Maimonides divided the mitzvot into positive and negative, this helped Jewish adherents to understand how to live their lives in a morally correct way and how to maintain a good relationship with God. Through his interpretation of the 613 mitzvot, Maimonides redirected the future of Judaism by keeping the Jewish faith strong amongst the Jewish communities whilst facing threats from the Almohads. Therefore, through his interpretation of the mitzvot, Maimonides was able to redirect the future of Judaism by transforming it into a dynamic religion, this is seen today as Judaism still exists in the 21st century and the 613 mitzvot are still applicable to modern society.
 
Besides his literary works, Maimonides offered new interpretations of Judaism after he became the chief Rabbi of Cairo in 1171. During his time as chief Rabbi, Maimonides dealt with matters ranging from matters that concerned Jewish law to matters that concerned general civil issues. For instance, Jewish adherents (including all members from all social classes) would write to Maimonides for advice on how to maintain their Jewish faith in their communities, Maimonides wrote responses (teshuvot) back to them. Maimonides’ responses helped keep Judaism strong during the Almohad invasion, which redirected the future of Judaism by preventing the religion from dissipating. Maimonides’ momentous contribution as the chief Rabbi of Cairo was acknowledged by the time magazine in 1985: “Maimonides is the most influential Jewish thinker of the Middle Ages, and quite possible of all time” Therefore, during his time as the Chief Rabbi of Cairo, Maimonides was able to offer new interpretations of Judaism through his responses to the queries of Jewish adherents from a range of different communities.

Maimonides literary works and the work he had done as chief Rabbi of Egypt provided new interpretations of the Jewish faith and redirected the path of Judaism by helping it to remain existent throughout different time periods. Consequently, without Maimonides’ literary works and responses (when he was the chief Rabbi) Judaism would not be the dynamic religion that it is in the 21st century. Through his restructuring and analysation of the integral Jewish texts, Maimonides consolidated the wider Jewish community during times of threats from the Almohads and Aristotelian philosophy. The impact of Maimonides’ work is reflected through the saying: “From moshe to moshe, there arose none like moshe”.  Maimonides impact on Judaism is still relevant today, as his interpretations of the Jewish faith have been concretised and many Jewish adherents continue to follow his guidance.

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Religious traditions are consequently changed over time by significant people. I would get rid of this as it is not necessary and isn’t a very strong opening. These significant individuals do not necessarily change their respective religions, but they offer new interpretations and open the future path for their religion. Born in Cordoba Spain in 1135, Moses Maimonides was an extremely influential Jewish philosopher and Rabbi who offered new interpretations of the Jewish beliefs and sacred texts and redirected the path of Judaism and its adherents during the time where Judaism was vulnerable to the threats from the Almohads and classical philosophy. I would have this earlier as maybe your second sentence as it more directly answers the question in relation to your specific study instead of rewording the question. Maimonides did this through his role as chief Rabbi of Cairo and his literary works: the Mishnah Torah, the Commentary on the Mishnah, the Guide to the perplexed and the Book of Commandments. Maimonides’ texts helped strengthen Judaism by making it accessible to all Jewish adherents and by providing new interpretations on the Jewish faith. Nicely summarised.
 
Maimonides offered new interpretations of the Jewish laws and ethical guidelines through his Mishnah Torah where he provided a simple systematic version of the Talmud in which all Jewish adherents would be able to interpret. Through the Mishnah Torah, Maimonides offered new interpretations of the Torah and the Talmud as he made them more accessible to everyday Jews as well as scholars. I feel like both these two sentences say the same thing. I would just get rid of the 2nd sentence. In the text, Maimonides revealed that: “A person who first reads the written Torah and then this work will know it from the whole of the Oral Torah” Good idea to put in a quote but this needs to be more sophisticatedly blended in. At the moment it feels as if it has just been stuck there. The quote I used for the HSC, I feel, better suits your argument as it more directly links with the last sentence on how the Mishneh Torah made the Talmud more accessible whilst this quote also gives examples to further your statement – The quote I used was that the Mishneh Torah was written “In plain language”… “so that thus the entire Oral Law might become systematically known to all” … accessible to young and old.” The Mishnah Torah consolidated Jewish adherents who were living in a society dominated by Islam by redirecting them to Judaism, This sentence needs to be more direct as it doesn’t really make sense. I think what you are trying to say is something like: Maimonides had a significant effect on Judaism as he consolidated it in the face of the threat of Islamic dominance and the revival of classical philosophy. thus preventing them from converting to Islam. In the 21st century, Jewish adherents who don’t have the time to read the Talmud can still acquire knowledge concerning Jewish beliefs and laws in the Mishnah Torah, this shows the impact of Maimonides interpretation of Judaism as without it, Jewish adherents wouldn’t be able to understand the Jewish laws and beliefs, therefore Judaism may not even have existed. This sentence in itself is too long and a bit generalised. Don’t know if this will help but this is the eg. I used for modern day use of the Mishneh Torah - Orthodox Jews follow the Shullkhan Arukh – the 16th century Jewish law code, which itself is based on the Mishneh Torah Furthermore, the impact of the Mishnah Torah being accessible to all Jewish adherents is revealed by Rabbi Shlomo Moshe Amar (Chief Rabbi of Israel and Rishon Lezion): “They added many indexes… so that it can be accessible to any person at any time, be he simple or wise”. Maimonides’ Mishnah Torah offers new interpretations on Judaism and redirected the future of Judaism. The example is great but is not explained and the concluding sentence appears just plastered there to answer the question. A sentence unwrapping the quote without being too repetitive (hard with Maimonides) would be good.
 
Maimonides’ Guide to the Perplexed(Moreh Nevuchim) was an innovative philosophical piece of writing which introduced the interpretation that science and religion could co-exist. Well put. Through this text, Maimonides strengthened Judaism against the threats of Aristotelian philosophy. By strengthening Picky but try use another word, perhaps reinforcing? Judaism, Maimonides directed the future path of Judaism, Full stop here. this is because without his interpretation the Aristotelian philosophy would have undermined the Jewish faith and Judaism may have dissipated. However, the Guide to the Perplexed was subject to controversy within the Jewish and Gentile communities. For instance, various scholars pointed out the contradictions between God’s commandments and the depictions of God. However, Maimonides responded to this criticism by concluding that the bible should not be taken literally. In addition, the Guide to the perplexed revealed that “Truth does not become more true by virtue of the fact that the entire world agrees with it, nor less so even if the whole world disagrees with it”, showing that the fact that science and religion could co-exist is the truth and will remain the truth even if everyone agrees or disagrees with it. This works well r.e combining quote and explanation. This is what could be better in the first paragraph. Furthermore, the Guide to the Perplexed was further subjected to criticism and controversy as some believed that Maimonides intentionally undermining Judaism by emphasising on rational thought as he concluded that the bible should not be taken literally. By creating a relationship between science and Judaism, Maimonides redirected Judaism during a time of separation between Sephardic and Ashkenazic Jews. The point about controversy is good but the link after it is not really relevant. If you are going to discuss the controversy and criticism, link this back to the part of the question about new interpretations and perhaps how the controversy surrounding his claims shows how this was a necessary process in the development of Judaism.

Through his Commentary on the Mishnah(Perush Ha-MIshnayot), Maimonides offered new interpretations on Judaism and redirected the path of Judaism as he made the Talmud clear, concise and accessible so that it could be understood by all Jewish adherents; past and present.  Great. The Commentary on the Mishnah, collected all the binding laws from the Talmud and explained the meaning behind each Mitzvot. This work also included the 13 principles of faith, which provided Jewish adherents with simple statements regarding Jewish beliefs. At first, the 13 principles of faith attracted widespread controversy, however over time they formed the basis of numerous Jewish credal statements and were added to modern editions of the Talmud, thus showing Maimonides’ redirection of the future of Judaism. Therefore, through his Commentary on the Mishnah and the 13 principles of faith, Maimonides offered new interpretations concerning Jewish faith and redirected the future of Judaism as he highlighted the Jewish beliefs in a universal context so that its relevance would carry on through time. I think again you need an example or quote to add depth to your response, otherwise it sounds repetitive. The quote I used about the 13 Articles of Faith in the HSC was: Maimonides refers to these thirteen principles of faith as "the fundamental truths of our religion and its very foundations.” This is what you are saying but in a more sophisticated manner as it shows wide research in including a direct quote.
 
In his Book of Commandments (Sefer-Ha-MItzvot), Maimonides listed and defined the 613 mitzvot into a simple and clear context. Maimonides divided the mitzvot into positive and negative, this helped Jewish adherents to understand how to live their lives in a morally correct way and how to maintain a good relationship with God. Through his interpretation of the 613 mitzvot, Maimonides redirected the future of Judaism by keeping the Jewish faith strong amongst the Jewish communities whilst facing threats from the Almohads. Therefore, through his interpretation of the mitzvot, Maimonides was able to redirect the future of Judaism by transforming it into a dynamic religion, this is seen today as Judaism still exists in the 21st century and the 613 mitzvot are still applicable to modern society. I didn’t use the book of commandments personally in the HSC as a focus in my Maimonides response, my suggestion here though would be to combine this paragraph and the 13 articles of faith as to make each more concise. I had this problem myself. Your info is good but a bit repetitive and if you try condense it hopefully you can maintain the same level of discussion but in a more direct manner.
 

Besides his literary works, Maimonides offered new interpretations of Judaism after he became the chief Rabbi of Cairo in 1171. During his time as chief Rabbi, Maimonides dealt with matters ranging from matters that concerned Jewish law to matters that concerned general civil issues. For instance, Jewish adherents (including all members from all social classes) would write to Maimonides for advice on how to maintain their Jewish faith in their communities, Maimonides wrote responses (teshuvot) back to them. Maimonides’ responses helped keep Judaism strong during the Almohad invasion, which redirected the future of Judaism by preventing the religion from dissipating. Maimonides’ momentous contribution as the chief Rabbi of Cairo was acknowledged by the time magazine in 1985: “Maimonides is the most influential Jewish thinker of the Middle Ages, and quite possible of all time” Therefore, during his time as the Chief Rabbi of Cairo, Maimonides was able to offer new interpretations of Judaism through his responses to the queries of Jewish adherents from a range of different communities. An interesting paragraph, again on something I personally did not use. I can’t comment directly therefore, however, I would say that the quote by Time Magazine is not exactly relevant to this paragraph as it is more referring to his philosophy, which you discuss in regards to his three texts.

Maimonides literary works and the work he had done as chief Rabbi of Egypt provided new interpretations of the Jewish faith and redirected the path of Judaism by helping it to remain existent throughout different time periods. Could make this perhaps more direct again. Consequently, without Maimonides’ literary works and responses (when he was the chief Rabbi) Judaism would not be the dynamic religion that it is in the 21st century. Through his restructuring and analysation of the integral Jewish texts, Maimonides consolidated the wider Jewish community during times of threats from the Almohads and Aristotelian philosophy. The impact of Maimonides’ work is reflected through the saying: “From moshe to moshe, there arose none like moshe”.  Maimonides impact on Judaism is still relevant today, as his interpretations of the Jewish faith have been concretised and many Jewish adherents continue to follow his guidance. I think within your essay, some modern day examples could strengthen this. These are the two I had:
•   13 Articles of Faith

•   Mishneh Torah
   ‘Yigdal’ prayer found in the Siddur – Jewish prayer book is based on the 13 articles

Orthodox Jews follow the Shullkhan Arukh – the 16th century Jewish law code, which itself is based on the Mishneh Torah
The conclusion is good, I would maybe recommend more specifically stating something along the lines of how the Mishneh Torah and Commentary on the Mishneh made it more accessible as while you have sort of done that, just mentioning the accessible part is key. Hope that helped!


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going into year 12, how should i prepare for this course? i happen to have a neglectful teacher who doesnt really cover the content properly and suggests that this course is relatively easy to ace. so, i guess my question is how miuch time should i dedicate to studies of religion? and do you think its possible to get a good mark without studying very hard for it? (im not from a catholic school btw).
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« Reply #764 on: December 25, 2017, 07:38:54 pm »
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going into year 12, how should i prepare for this course? i happen to have a neglectful teacher who doesnt really cover the content properly and suggests that this course is relatively easy to ace. so, i guess my question is how miuch time should i dedicate to studies of religion? and do you think its possible to get a good mark without studying very hard for it? (im not from a catholic school btw).
thanks.

I put the absolute minimum into SOR2, and in the end it was only 1-2 marks away from my other subjects. Depending on what religious traditions you do, the content between topics is extremely similar. For instance, I studied Judaism, Islam and Christianity, and one of the ethical teachings for all of them was the 'Golden Rule'. This made my notes super condensed and cramming was a lot simpler for SOR, as I was simply repeating the same steps throughout. That being said, I went to a Catholic school, so that may have some degree of impact.

Overall though, SOR2 scales extremely well, especailly considering what I just said about how easy it is to study for. However, my teacher was amazing and warned us about all the traps that people fall into, which causes them to lose all their marks. I guess this was also a key reason as to why I was able to do well despite minimal study.

In terms of study, I did notes and practice exams. However, I would always skip the essay questions. In practice exams, the main focus was to do multiple choice and short answers. You find that when doing the MCs throughout the years, the questions become highly repetitive and it comes to the point where it seems as though they've copy pasted past HSC questions. For essay practice, I only did essay plans. i.e. I listed the evidence I would use in each paragraph, but I never actually wrote an essay.
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English (Advanced): 91    Legal Studies: 92    Modern History: 91    Studies of Religion 2: 90    Business Studies: 92

ATAR: 96.75

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