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miraxx:
--- Quote from: justwannawish on October 01, 2017, 03:17:41 pm ---Hi and welcome,
The free service is available for everyone ;D , however, you do need a certain amount of posts. Currently, because of the lead up to the HSC, it's 50 posts, which isn't that much if you contribute to forums, talk to other people, ask and answer questions, etc. Let me know if you need anything :)
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--- Quote from: jamonwindeyer on October 01, 2017, 05:24:01 pm ---You're all VIP's ;)
But yeah, as mentioned above - We have to prioritise a little, so we offer it as a reward for people who have posted around the forums a bit!
Full explanation is here, if you like ;D
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Yep, thank you to you both but don't worry I'm definitely going to be hanging out here a lot :)
justwannawish:
--- Quote from: miraxx on October 01, 2017, 10:26:03 pm ---Yep, thank you to you both but don't worry I'm definitely going to be hanging out here a lot :)
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No problem! I used to be a quiet lurker too but commenting and helping people is a lot more fun ;)
blasonduo:
--- Quote from: jamonwindeyer on September 23, 2017, 11:01:49 am ---
“I never was able to thank my father, for all I learnt from him, to tell him without his lessons, I never would have survived.” The dialogue portrays a broken link in Pi’s past, and how reconsidering these events can spark new values and perspectives in his life. Go beyond the character!
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Hello! Sorry to ask this so late, but your main point about my essay was how I should expand on discovery past the character (as shown above.) But I am still currently unsure how to do this :( .
Could you help me and give me just a little helping hand please?
Thanks.
jamonwindeyer:
--- Quote from: blasonduo on October 01, 2017, 11:02:29 pm ---Hello! Sorry to ask this so late, but your main point about my essay was how I should expand on discovery past the character (as shown above.) But I am still currently unsure how to do this :( .
Could you help me and give me just a little helping hand please?
Thanks.
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Sure! So let me take that sentence:
“I never was able to thank my father, for all I learnt from him, to tell him without his lessons, I never would have survived.” The dialogue portrays a broken link in Pi’s past, and how reconsidering these events can spark new values and perspectives in his life.
And reign it a little to go beyond the character:
The use of dialogue, “I never was able to thank my father... I never would have survived,” makes the audience realise how reconsidering past events can spark new values and perspectives.
It is the tiniest change hey? And that's the thing, your essay is so close to spot on - It is just that you are discussing characters and how they discover, how they change. But that isn't important - It is how these concepts are represented to the audience, and the characters are just puppets in achieving that. Thus, focusing on the characters are unnecessary - You can take the same idea and generalise it ;D
justwannawish:
Hey!
Do you guys mark generic essays that can be moulded for an exam? Or should I attach a question too :P
Because I have 3 main themes and I've used them in previous essays and they can be moulded to most questions and was wondering whether I could post them here for feedback
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