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Prompt Essay Help "life of Galileo"
« on: July 08, 2016, 02:45:04 am »
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hello,
I'm writing my essay based on Bertolt's play "life of Galileo"  i have chosen two prompts  "Fear is a strong catalyst for conflict" and  "encountering conflict changes both those in power and those without power" I have chosen do a expository essay. i need help with getting this started but my head is all over the place. I need a plan or something to get me started.

also if someone can please also provide any other examples than "life of Galileo"  to these prompt it would help me a lot.

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Re: Prompt Essay Help "life of Galileo"
« Reply #1 on: July 08, 2016, 01:25:08 pm »
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I'm not doing conflict this year, so this may or may not be relevant to your context. But I'd done conflict last year so I may have a good idea what you may be on about.

For Expository, you will need to follow quite a rigid structure, which as follows: Intro, Para 1, Para 2, Para 3, Para 4, Conclusion.
Since expository is the most popular type, you will need to make yours different and stand out from the rest. So on your introduction, you will need to start with something interesting in your introduction, be it a quote, anecdote, story, analogy or anything that can that intro, yours.

You will need to plan based on your topics that you have been given. You must adhere to the prompt (if you don't you lose a hell lot of marks). For planning, it see it as being two main ways.

Method 1: plan from the topic down to the examples.
Take the prompt "It is though conflict we grow."
First, imagine someone said this to you. You would want to ask this person some questions such as:
  • Can we not grow though conflict?
  • In what ways do we grow though conflict?

Then, use these questions to make your point, which will be the points you would want to write in your essay. Con up with ~6. You can eliminate them later down to 3 or 4.
Using the example above, it is likely to be:
We grow more mentally though conflict; We grow physically through conflict; We do not grow from conflict that is too much for us; we can choose not to grow from conflict; and so on.

Look for examples. Cut out the points you don't have examples for. Combine points if you can. Once you get down to 3 or 4 points, write the topic sentences for each point. Take the point above "We can choose not to grow from conflict." I could make it a topic sentence which would sound like "Often, we choose to not mature* through the various disputes* throughout our lives, thereby disallowing us to grow from conflict."

Once you have your topic sentences, you can start writing.

Method 2: Plan from example to topic.
Essentially, this is the inverse of method 1. You start coming up with examples relevant to the prompt. Take the prompt I used above: "It is though conflict we grow." Now, I come up with examples relevant to the prompt such as:
  • People learning their lessons after encountering conflict
  • People who couldn't cope with conflict become weaker and eventually lead to issues (think mental health

You get the idea. When you have your examples, you group them based on their similarities, can name each group.
Say the groups were: People who grow from conflict, people who don't grow from conflict, people who are damaged though conflict.

Then, use these to create topic sentences for you paragraphs. Using "people who grow from conflict" I could make it a topic sentence that is: "In some instances, people who develop through the quarrels* they come across throughout their lives."

The begin writing.

For external resources, you can see this link:

http://www.vcestudyguides.com/encountering-conflict-external-resources/
It doesn't give you specific examples, but it can give you a few areas where you can look for examples relevant to your prompt.

Last year, when I did conflict, I did The Quiet American and On the Waterfront as the main texts. You may consider these resources too. Apart from that, anything you read, seen, watched, heard. Honestly, you can even find resources in even the most unusual sources. I even found stuff from a video game.   :)

I hope this helps.

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Re: Prompt Essay Help "life of Galileo"
« Reply #2 on: July 08, 2016, 03:28:46 pm »
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I'm also doing LoG as my text!! I also prefer writing expository too :)
As for these prompts I'd first try to think of the areas to delve into and explore :)

Here's some ideas to get you started (these are probably worded badly but hope you get the general idea):
"Fear is a strong catalyst for conflict"
- Agree, and you can back this by using examples from LoG, e.g Church fearing the possible societal changes Galileo may bring, fearing changes to its power etc
- Not only fear, ignorance and greed are also contributing factors in causing conflict. (exploring other factors)
-Sometimes, conflict can arise without fear (slightly disagreeing)
- Not only is fear a catalyst for conflict, it can also used as a mean to resolve conflict? (idk if this is valid, but I guess the Church used Gaileo's fear of physical torture against him)

"encountering conflict changes both those in power and those without power"
- Conflict has a great scope for harm, sometimes there are no victors from a conflict
- However, sometimes conflicts disproportionately affects one group, such as victims, particularly where power is unevenly distributed. When one group holds all the power, the do not need to compromise and the results can be catastrophic for individuals (Galileo vs church)
-Power is a not a static concept, but can be altered over the course of conflict (during conflict, the line between the powerless and powerful can often become blurred, with the powerless becoming the powerful in some cases) Sometimes the specific distribution of power can be a source of conflict: one in which the powerless seek to become powerful, and resolution is tied with this shift
-Nonetheless, conflicts can be an opportunity for positive changes, even if the results are negative for those directly involved: the conflict in LOG resulted in positive societal changes


As for external sources, if you haven't found this amazing gem of a thread go read it now:  ~*Context External Examples Guide*~
Some of the sources I used were just from other novels, art, historical events, current affairs etc. External examples of conflict between the powerful/powerless or between individual/government is always good, as you can draw parallels to Galileo (powerless) vs Church (powerful). E.g Ai WeiWei, Julian Assange, Mandela
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Re: Prompt Essay Help "life of Galileo"
« Reply #3 on: July 09, 2016, 11:03:39 am »
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Thank you very much FallingStar and Elizawei ill definitely use both your ideas


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Re: Prompt Essay Help "life of Galileo"
« Reply #4 on: July 09, 2016, 11:36:50 am »
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how can i write a good introduction with ‘’Fear is a strong catalyst for conflict’’ every time i'm writing one it sounds so boring and bland.
since most people will probably do a Expository style writing. how can i make mine stand out.


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Re: Prompt Essay Help "life of Galileo"
« Reply #5 on: July 09, 2016, 08:03:19 pm »
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how can i write a good introduction with ‘’Fear is a strong catalyst for conflict’’ every time i'm writing one it sounds so boring and bland.
since most people will probably do a Expository style writing. how can i make mine stand out.


thank you

For Expository, you will need to follow quite a rigid structure, which as follows: Intro, Para 1, Para 2, Para 3, Para 4, Conclusion.
Since expository is the most popular type, you will need to make yours different and stand out from the rest. So on your introduction, you will need to start with something interesting in your introduction, be it a quote, anecdote, story, analogy or anything that can that intro, yours.

I've basically answered your question. To help, you can start a collection of conflict quotes, anecdote, analogy and other things you may want to put in the intro.

The intro would be structured like this:
1. Your interesting stuff.
2. Link that interesting stuff to the prompt.
3. Your contention upon the prompt
4. Your main ideas in response to that contention.
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